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Dots....do I have to connect?
Connections...
They have a funny way of
making themselves
known,
hidden,
bold,
and even subtle...
Kind of like the past...
Choosing what seems randomly
to creep up to remembrance.
To create a sense of pining.
To emote feelings once believed buried.
Attempt of webbed confusion,
masked in memories of what was....
Connections
even when broken...
somehow they still remain.
They have a funny way of
making themselves
known,
hidden,
bold,
and even subtle...
Kind of like the past...
Choosing what seems randomly
to creep up to remembrance.
To create a sense of pining.
To emote feelings once believed buried.
Attempt of webbed confusion,
masked in memories of what was....
Connections
even when broken...
somehow they still remain.
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Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
19th Dec 2013 1:46pm
Randomness versus predictable movements/events. This age old question is highlighted by your composition here, at least for me.
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re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
19th Dec 2013 6:38pm
Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
19th Dec 2013 5:58pm
Nikn, you Rock lady! :) Another wonderful piece...Xo
Really enjoyed this...
Really enjoyed this...
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re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
19th Dec 2013 6:39pm
Thanks Rain...Christmas always brings up weird past things you thought were gone...lol....life right?!?!?!
Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
31st Dec 2013 7:50pm
Yup yup ain't that the truth? Connections
I've had over time have been many, n many have left
but I still recall, n they still feel connected on end
I've had over time have been many, n many have left
but I still recall, n they still feel connected on end
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re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
2nd Jan 2014 5:52pm
They do don't they--there are some that out of no where come to mind and heart...sigh! :)
Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Feb 2014 8:46pm
6th Jan 2014 3:16am
Yes....at times our past just never goes a way. Always seem to haunt us in some way. Hope I got this right. LOL!!!! That's what I felt anyway. :)
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re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
6th Jan 2014 12:52pm
Past present future...all get tied even when we don't want it too! :) You got it!!
Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
16th Apr 2014 6:39am
Indeed! Connections form bonds of eternity!..It's an amazing thing & loved how you explained this! Diggin' your writing style shell!=)
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re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
16th Apr 2014 2:00pm
So humbled and greatly appreciate!!!! Looking forward to more of your writes too!!!!!!!!!
re: re: Re: Dots....do I have to connect?
17th Apr 2014 1:47am