Ink Heart

Crim,

HOT!!! I've had to open the window a bit on this cold day after this one! ; ) Enjoyed!!!

tornado

And presented in molten silk form, your ink drips passion the mind can dine on :) Lovely and provocative*

Love arson fingers...excellent writing Crim. :)

Hot ink, all the hotter for its sapiosexual tension...

Whew, Crim.

Sipping from the fountain of arson eyes
every dream steaming inside you
revealing mirror messages
The poet is easily you

Excellent Crim

beautifully sensual ink Brenda xo

oh my goodness, this is an awesome write. you so nailed the art of melting words and verses together for a perfect flow and uninterrupted movement and feeling. I really, really love this part:

"in your arms
I shelter
in your word
I hide"

awesome!!

...sometimes the ink's emotions can be so powerful that it prints itself on your heart, like a tattoo...
Seductive pen, Crim....Xo

Delicious lecture brenda!
What a way of capturing the essence

u produce true class in this write..
I wish I could touch a person like the poet here has done to u...

coming to ur write,
the first stanza speaks a lot...but the one that caught me the most was the 'coca cola eyes' line....

it seems less darker than ur usual writes but delightful as always....

keep Rollin

cyanide...

The passion of the mental dance burns hot and you captured the essence here, Crim! Nice write ;-) peace n love
Miki

making me creamy inside  
seducing my cold core  
turning it molten  

you've lit my fire  
with your love
 

nice  cold to hot flare
and orgasms are for what
all women care

Know that is pure poetic heaven! You draw the reader straight in and capture every bit of this romantic piece. So sexy are the words. My friend I'm still clapping on your creativity.

You've lit my fire crimsin...flame on!

wow Brenda, this is super hot, each line dripping with sexuality and desire.

I find romance here as well as lust, Crim. 'coca cola eyes' must be very dark, & also moist...

Lovely romance and lustily beautiful sensuous desire, Bren
I'm really in awe of your softer side (you know I love the hard side <3) but this is magic! More? please

Very beautiful ink.....very sexy, romantic. Really enjoyed this. :)

Some wonderful lines here Crim, a beautifully written piece. :)

youre one bad bitch Crim. its been fun to watch you rise. hit that shit til it soaks your proverbial bed

Wow, this is an awesome write, Crim!

One can taste the words you weave, and a sexy bite to it as always :)

Bravo applauding you wow this is awesome

Hot hot hot.

Can't believe i missed this, but since I earn missing u I stopper by... This was sensually beautiful n made me ache too becuz damn I missed ur ink! Come back sweetie :(

Wow, I'm glad I stumbled upon this. Your writing style is like a mix between Plath, Dickenson, and Amy Lee. My favorite part is "poetic dreamer with coca cola eyes", the comparison is brilliant. I'm jealous. This is really really good.

completely epic way to speak what one does to you

This is super cool! The structure is punchy, yet you've managed to give the poem a really nice soothing and sensual rhythm. Skilfully crafted and the lines you weave are killer.

"poetic dreamer  
with coca cola eyes  
slipping into my mind..." so sweet it will rot our teeth.

Awesome write, Crim!

beauty at its best!

Painting such emotion against a colorful enough background in detail with a fine brush.