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Good to bad,light to dark
never understood,
how it changes so fast.
Right to wrong,friend to foe
the hurt runs so deep.
Smile to frown,up to down
it makes my head numb.
Peace to war,love to hate
will we ever change,
or is it just too late?
never understood,
how it changes so fast.
Right to wrong,friend to foe
the hurt runs so deep.
Smile to frown,up to down
it makes my head numb.
Peace to war,love to hate
will we ever change,
or is it just too late?
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17th Dec 2013 2:11am
Excellent questions hash...all we can do is check ourselves...that's where hope grows.
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2013 3:14am
We hope to see some of those questions answered in our lifetime but it looks bleak, sadly.
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18th Dec 2013 11:22pm
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17th Dec 2013 6:47am
we are too mercurial, filled with self-importance and greed to answer those questions and invoke change.
Profound ink Mister Hashman.
Profound ink Mister Hashman.
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2013 7:00pm
I am an optimist, I guess... I always think there must be some way...
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18th Dec 2013 11:31pm
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Anonymous
18th Dec 2013 11:32am
The only constant is change, let's hope we move in a better direction in future. Truth in verse, lovely work
Peace n love
Peace n love
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18th Dec 2013 11:36pm
The only constant is change...so spooky,2th time I saw those words today(thanks) Peace and love to you mikimoondancer :)
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18th Dec 2013 1:27pm
Agree with moondancer,
"or is it just too late?"
Nah...never too late for attempts at change!
"or is it just too late?"
Nah...never too late for attempts at change!
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18th Dec 2013 11:37pm
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18th Dec 2013 11:42pm
At the end you asked a good question. Change for many is a hard thing to do. As people get older they tend too get stuck in their ways. Change is a part of evolution, the cycle of life, but if you're unwilling to change then your life will have no growth. Love the piece my friend. A poem with insight is top rated.
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18th Dec 2013 11:52pm
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19th Dec 2013 9:27pm
Never too late but we can only hope.
Very nice pondering ink, Hash...xo
Very nice pondering ink, Hash...xo
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20th Dec 2013 00:46am
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23rd Dec 2013 11:53am
Sure we'll change. But to which end? Love a good questioning Hashman. Enjoyed, Sir. Thank you.
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25th Dec 2013 9:36pm
Thought-provoking subjects will never change ...
Otherwise there would be nothing left to ponder. How boring life would be.
Otherwise there would be nothing left to ponder. How boring life would be.
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26th Dec 2013 1:11am