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Brainwave Training for The Meek & Wistful
in the interim is thee
con
templation of deep,varied
vagaries, as
like,yknow, I was very young(o!veryoung)
when I was born
when I was born
to be rather yootful
in bearing despite 'bad posture', &
inability to pose proper
so's that every seemin'thing pass'ed 'me' by
in passing in passing the holefcknthing passed
past out inside'out & more than manytimes before
any of thishit could pass along, eye learn'ed
that The Truth of My Delusion was, indeed,
collective pandemic, so this, my my'o'my every
brethren consumes thee toxin, then oozes the toxin
(out from The Big Orifice of all diskindly Mankind),
then reconsumes 'it', re'oozes 'it' & so forth, wit
as much ad nauseum of a yellowfever, bloodly'drippin
from ever human hole wee have..........
what am I saying?saying as iyam way more picky'ficky
details than is necessary to preformulate adequate
denial systems needed to put off the inevitable calamity,
calumny, contestings of d'lusions cloaked in piety, fervor[of]
justifyings wit bigger bullets, chemy-gasses, & slash'n'burn
blowuppity shock+awe....not't'mention 'who gits th'money' out
of baths'o'bloods, by jingo!
o!little shitties!, I beg meself t'shut up me hole-of-digression...
Aye!was very young(veryoung!)when eye was born, unsuspectful
of how'long howlong I'd have to think upon you,& you,&you again,
yearning & longing at the tail'end of 'my term' nestled into a
century of solitude
yeah, "young when I was born"......I thought I closed the previous century wit the closure of 'me'....
demi'ghost peekin'round corners, knowin'full'well that getting
any elder gonna fckn kill 'me' good'n'dead, sooner
than later, now'er than never, fearing-or-not,
thus resolving any silly eX'istential 'issues'
that
may linger in any such disaware self-of-us-all
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Published 15th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 5:51pm
youse built grate tempoe!!!!! Rm
19th Dec 2013 1:04am
19th Dec 2013 00:33am
I felt the different speeds and got lost in the accelerating madness of the rants. It's so silly that your work asks for "honest critique" honestly I've never read anything like it
19th Dec 2013 1:15am
" honestly I've never read anything like it ",
a great compliment....& probably the same 'reason' that 'admirers' have dwindled to a most precious few.
Does it come across 'too intense'?
I myself feel, in re-reading my stuff, that it's most light'hearted....maybe even frivolous
I dunno.....thank ye for your 'honest critique'
too bad there's not a 'silly critique' option. Ha.
bless ye, pal...I honestly appreciate
19th Dec 2013 1:19am
the second and third were intense but not "too" it changes the pace of the peace
