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14th Dec 2013 10:47pm
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16th Dec 2013 11:16am
after I inked it ... I found the image on the net - it just worked ...
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 11:33pm
So much conveyed in so few words ... it's not easy, but you make it look so...
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16th Dec 2013 11:25am
I was experimenting with a two line 7-7 haikai - usually reserved for renku (a collaborative piece of two or more artists) ...
... At the same time I wanted something succinct on what snow angel kisses does to her body ... her lips
Thanks for the feedback
LSP
... At the same time I wanted something succinct on what snow angel kisses does to her body ... her lips
Thanks for the feedback
LSP
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16th Dec 2013 2:19am
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16th Dec 2013 11:32am
Lol ... that's like Pegasus asking un burro how to fly?
Any heights I hit is because of what I've learned from writers like you ... xoxo
LSP
Any heights I hit is because of what I've learned from writers like you ... xoxo
LSP
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28th Dec 2013 4:13pm
LSP, these lines are brutal and beautiful and I'm glad you got another shot of a lone rose bud in the snow.
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28th Dec 2013 11:22pm
It's not the visual I had in mind when I wrote the piece but the image somehow range true in the end ...
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP