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Liar
Silence say's it all, captured breath
no truth, no words, no honesty
Love is starved, feeding off hate
you're deceitful, I'm a fool, once more
no truth, no words, no honesty
Love is starved, feeding off hate
you're deceitful, I'm a fool, once more
Published 14th Dec 2013
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14th Dec 2013 9:05am
some really personifying phrases there ..
pretty deep n connects well ... keep up the good work ....
keep writing.
cyanide...
pretty deep n connects well ... keep up the good work ....
keep writing.
cyanide...
14th Dec 2013 10:05am
14th Dec 2013 9:54am
I feel sad when I read that Tommie Lynn. Remember to breath. Impacting doll. Thank you.
14th Dec 2013 10:08am
Breathing is the easy part...controlling anger, not so easy.Thank you TS ;)
14th Dec 2013 5:19pm
A strong statement indeed! It is a rare quality, complete honesty. well done Tommie!
14th Dec 2013 6:25pm
14th Dec 2013 11:13pm
This was a painful read for me coming from such a beautiful lady but an honest and great write!!! much love Crim
14th Dec 2013 11:21pm
14th Dec 2013 11:23pm
14th Dec 2013 11:34pm
In few words you were able to convey to me hurt with a tinge of anger almost at yourself for falling again
Good write
Good write
14th Dec 2013 11:39pm
14th Dec 2013 11:55pm
I want to kick his ass for you! But I know it would be unhealthy.:)
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