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Pretty Little Dead Girl
She counted,
and waited,
for the first stars.
As dusk prevailed,
here comes,
the dark.
Lucid
dreamers,
putrid corpses.
chanting,
around white
roses.
As sunset closes,
the moonlight
imposes.
A petal
for each,
dispersing
in the air.
Rotting flesh,
torn clothes,
ran amok
every where.
Her voice
resonated hymns.
Which she sang,
out loud.
Hypnotically
psychotic,
mesmerizing
sounds.
Murmurs and
giggles,
ghost children
out of graves.
Ungrounded,
and released
in the dark
to play.
There's a ring
around the roses,
and she's in the
middle.
Making spirits
dance
in trance-like
rhythm.
Oh so pretty,
oh so bright,
they played hide
and seek,
deep into the
night.
What a nuisance
is time,
when she finally has
fun.
It went to quickly,
daylight's peeking,
here comes dawn.
She counted,
waited,
for the last stars.
With one last
giggle,
she awaits,
the next night's
dark. [/font]
Published 13th Dec 2013
| Edited 7th Aug 2014
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13th Dec 2013 7:06pm
13th Dec 2013 7:29pm
14th Dec 2013 1:59am
14th Dec 2013 4:20am
14th Dec 2013 3:37am
Ah Man, really enjoyed readin this my friend,
"Oh so pretty,
oh so bright,
they played hide
and seek,
deep into the
night."
She is calling out the ghost children, to come out and play, got the feelin of this that a child has, so me read it as a child, and liked it that way also, pure, simple and fun, the innocence of her child spirit lives on and on, dig that man, dig it :) ... :Eddie / wolf
"Oh so pretty,
oh so bright,
they played hide
and seek,
deep into the
night."
She is calling out the ghost children, to come out and play, got the feelin of this that a child has, so me read it as a child, and liked it that way also, pure, simple and fun, the innocence of her child spirit lives on and on, dig that man, dig it :) ... :Eddie / wolf
14th Dec 2013 4:24am
Lol!
Thank You Wolf!
I'm just melting off that monster writer's block I had.
Now I'm back fresh.
XD
Thank You Wolf!
I'm just melting off that monster writer's block I had.
Now I'm back fresh.
XD
3rd Jan 2014 8:16am
3rd Jan 2014 8:23am
I try my best every day.
Comments like yours makes me wanna try harder.
So, Thank you.
Comments like yours makes me wanna try harder.
So, Thank you.
