She is morning.I am night

just beautiful sweet read JF..loved the title & the last liner with 'but'
"but She is morning. I am night"
..but I am thinking how the twilight holds both together, momentarily, but mingling;) thanks for the read!

Magnificent craftsmanship that conveys the angst and yearning of these two lovers ... your chosen image is just as wonderful as the ink

LSP

I feel this very close to my heart. It is a current feeling.
At least she is out here brother. She can still be felt. And strongly. Thank you John.

This is a beautiful magical write full of longing as the night longs for the day only getting moments together.. brilliant inking John :) much love Crim

entirely magnificent song, someone have to sing it. with arpha and guitar

This gave me chills... one of your best ever... classic and vivid and gorgeous... thank you.

very beautiful... touching yes. but i know one thing i never let any chick be my morning. rule #1- if i'm awake she needs to be gone. kudos

Oh, but the dusk does kiss the dawn in the twilight... magically and magnificently, John... I come to this in the morning with open arms. It is a star lit stunner :)~

I think I'm in love with your pen.....Xo

stunning ink... :)

John your first liners are sick! Man I tell you with lines like these, "the dawn & dusk can never meet She is morning. I am night
I chant my dirges in the shadows
She weaves her wonders in the light." Bravo my friend bravo!

Simple and yet so elegant, beautiful lines cascading from each stanza.
John, I love it so much!
I'm taking this baby with me :)

yeah me and my friend are like that but that is fixing to changes

This is beautiful I love it

Your work is penned beautifully, and is a pleasure to feast one's eyes on.

So futile, heartbreakingly sad but absolutely beautifully penned, John! I love this poem!

Adored this poem. Soft and beautiful

Mr Feddeler, I felt the beautiful pain of distance and time in this piece. It's stunning.

Love this, one of my favorites,

nicely written. I liked this one alot

we’re never close enough to kiss

but we are so close
yet never kiss
don't take me a miss  
my mouth stinks
so she feels
liquor, wine and cum she reels
yet others show a desire to kiss
but I can't take a chance
lest my thoughts
go amiss

and others lower's
I dare to kiss
would that do
let me know
and so I will eat
all who ask me
to do so

This is my favorite of yours. I wrpte a similar one comparing the one i love to the moon and I to the sun.

Beautifully  penned xx ~

Another gem. Glad to have found this one. Strong, cohesive, with feeling - start to finish. The cheat in me hopes for an eclipse to break the rules of night and day allowing moments where the two still meet.

Tragic and beautiful!

Although I commented on this when you first graced DUP with it, I'm so glad you entered it for consideration in my recent competition ... I simply love reading your work Sir John.

To be bound by nocturnal chains.....loved it