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one rainy day
the rain falls slowly
an endless drizzle
the wind out of the north
I ponder a book of poems
waiting for my lover...
an endless drizzle
the wind out of the north
I ponder a book of poems
waiting for my lover...
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Re: one rainy day
Anonymous
7th Dec 2013 9:35pm
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Re: one rainy day
7th Dec 2013 9:44pm
Making love on
a rainy afternoon,
slowly, passionately,
is one of the most
beautiful things
to pass your time.
Promising lines, J.!
a rainy afternoon,
slowly, passionately,
is one of the most
beautiful things
to pass your time.
Promising lines, J.!
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Re: one rainy day
7th Dec 2013 11:24pm
Re: one rainy day
8th Dec 2013 00:02am
love this for its simplicity. few words to convey a scene and a feeling. wonderful.
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Re: one rainy day
Anonymous
8th Dec 2013 1:31am
Read them to her and watch...
smiling here...
smiling here...
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Re: one rainy day
8th Dec 2013 1:41am
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