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Short poem 5-7-5
your so radiant smile
far distance may cool our love
your eyes light my life
Published 6th Dec 2013
| Edited 15th Dec 2013
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6th Dec 2013 11:48pm
7th Dec 2013 5:06am
Anonymous
7th Dec 2013 7:22am
I think this is much better, i like the short precise delivery of the message. Haiku is a very nice way of saying so little and yet conveying so much, very nice Malin.
Thank you, Vee, for your help. I have now understood the rules, very interesting poetic media, indeed!
