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beautifuk
sting me. (not with needles that pierce my skin, that
inject chemical amnesia into my veins, transporting
me to a plane of false euphoria; but harsh, harsh & frigid
is the corporeal daylight when I awaken.)
sting me with your eyes.
beguile the sordid secrets that you extort from me, when
we explore the naked fire of each other. use those
paradigms to compose the erotic poetry of our appetition.
plagiarize my fantasies.
you urge confessions from the guidepost of my soul,
just as you urge the cum from my cock.
we are outlaws of obscenity. we vandalize orchards of
forbidden fruit. in that garden of tempests, we make a
bed of the soiled earth. you spread your legs, wide as the
horizon, & I fall into the sunset of your vale of Venus.
raise me from the ashes of battle, as we blend the nudity
of our desire, flesh upon trembling flesh, sweat merging
with crystalling nectar, unto the blossoming spectacle of
chromatic orgasm.
with the mighty subversion of your cunt:
shock me that much!
Published 6th Dec 2013
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6th Dec 2013 10:27am
6th Dec 2013 11:05am
6th Dec 2013 12:16pm
6th Dec 2013 12:59pm
I follow my fellow commentators:
Piercing, stinging but emanating
beauty and passion.
Amazing!
Piercing, stinging but emanating
beauty and passion.
Amazing!
6th Dec 2013 3:30pm
Your pen is a euphoric needle injecting my mind transporting me. Upon the last line the eyes look away now awake I am left empty.
Beautiful work
Beautiful work
6th Dec 2013 3:35pm
6th Dec 2013 10:52pm
The picture made it hard to read your poem, lol.. but I did and impressed I am... You're such a stunner, John :)~
6th Dec 2013 11:18pm
Undeniably beautiful, love the orgasmic eroticism that uniquely compliments and transcends the rawness
7th Dec 2013 7:06pm
Great title and so many good lines, John. I thought the fourth stanza was especially brilliant. I can see "outlaws of obscenity" on t shirts for sure !. Terrific stuff.
7th Dec 2013 8:41pm
A muted build into an erotic blend of revelation with a crescendo to climax. Your mix and weave of your words always seem paint unique and felt images.
Anonymous
8th Dec 2013 7:59am
On it...
8th Dec 2013 9:43am
The name of your piece is priceless! The poetic flow is amazing with a cold line as this, " . you spread your legs, wide as the horizon, & I fall into the sunset of your vale of Venus." Your skills are cold as ice my friend.
14th Dec 2013 5:51pm
16th Dec 2013 9:36am
Chromatic orgasm; I say genius. Thank you, that was a very good charismatic fuck.
Anonymous
18th Dec 2013 8:54pm
I went to another dimension here through your erotically spun verse <3
