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I fucked with all the minds on DUP
I fucked with all the minds on DUP
That's what I did, you see, you see
I commented hither and thither
Inserting my trademark slither
Then I moved to comment on poems too
I did that here and thare, it really is true
And then to top it all off,
This one made me scoff,
I decided against the stricture
And changed my profile picture.
That's what I did, you see, you see
I commented hither and thither
Inserting my trademark slither
Then I moved to comment on poems too
I did that here and thare, it really is true
And then to top it all off,
This one made me scoff,
I decided against the stricture
And changed my profile picture.
Published 2nd Feb 2011
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3rd Feb 2011 5:16am
3rd Feb 2011 12:24pm
It's still in the testing stage, I may change it slightly in the future, but only time will tell!
3rd Feb 2011 1:18pm
funny, intelligent, witty, sarcastic, mocking, skilled rich and mysterious artist to explore on and on and on...Love you always for your fucking work whatsoever coming like unstoppable water from a tap in a hilly region that chills your spine with a shock. And loved this piece too.
3rd Feb 2011 6:52pm
I love you comment, not just for its praise, that is nice, but the metaphor too. The metaphor wrapped itself round my heart like a warm blanket.
You caught my
Wee little mind
laughing for a long time
with your fine
rhyme
This time,
You got it right.
This rhyme
of yours is just like
A sweet wine.
Thanks for the time
And one more time
For fucking with my mind
The pleasure was all mine.
Wee little mind
laughing for a long time
with your fine
rhyme
This time,
You got it right.
This rhyme
of yours is just like
A sweet wine.
Thanks for the time
And one more time
For fucking with my mind
The pleasure was all mine.
3rd Feb 2011 6:50pm
I played with your mind
Like burnt bacon rind
Or another play thing
While listening to swing
Your comment is nicely received
Though, what have we really achieved?
Like burnt bacon rind
Or another play thing
While listening to swing
Your comment is nicely received
Though, what have we really achieved?
3rd Feb 2011 6:31pm
