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Surrender
Lips full and plump
aching to be kissed
with such fiery passion
Haunted by explosive
wet kisses I surrender to
the comfort each time
aching to be kissed
with such fiery passion
Haunted by explosive
wet kisses I surrender to
the comfort each time
Published 6th Dec 2013
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6th Dec 2013 3:14am
Sometimes kissing can be as fulfilling as sex...I still remember the taste of past and infrequent present kisses. Thank you for reminding me of this beauty! Wonderful write!
6th Dec 2013 3:19am
A kiss is just so beautiful and personal ...the head tilt, hands on the face, hands in the hair, a kiss can never fade.Thanks GW ;)
6th Dec 2013 3:56am
And you forgot looking into those sapphire eyes...oh that's right that would be a pleasure experienced by me...I mean whoever....doh!
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6th Dec 2013 6:27pm
Anonymous
6th Dec 2013 4:08pm
Kisses are so powerful. Sometimes they get overshadowed by sex but there's nothing more amazing than a spontaneous makeout session. Powerful and sultry writing!
6th Dec 2013 6:27pm
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6th Dec 2013 4:26pm
Tommie Lynn,
Indeed! A fiery explosion worthy of surrender! Nicely written!
tornado
Indeed! A fiery explosion worthy of surrender! Nicely written!
tornado
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