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3 word inspiration: the number 298, streaking, exaggeration
298 Members on the screen
The aftermath is so obscene
Apparently Hemihead was the cause
Did all the ladies without a pause
But I think the truth is not,
And he's tepid not sultry hot
While he was on the pull
I was messing with wool
And so now I pluck the eyes
To start streaking in the skys
So now my tale has been told
Which of us was more bold?
The aftermath is so obscene
Apparently Hemihead was the cause
Did all the ladies without a pause
But I think the truth is not,
And he's tepid not sultry hot
While he was on the pull
I was messing with wool
And so now I pluck the eyes
To start streaking in the skys
So now my tale has been told
Which of us was more bold?
Published 2nd Feb 2011
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2nd Feb 2011 9:47pm
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2nd Feb 2011 9:50pm
2nd Feb 2011 9:57pm
Oh please don't do that! Because I've just posted another poem that mocks yours.
Thank you for your inspiring piece, I've killed you now rest in peace.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/13933/
Thank you for your inspiring piece, I've killed you now rest in peace.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/13933/
3rd Feb 2011 2:49am
3rd Feb 2011 7:51am
im glad that my three words i posted were the ones you replied too :) you came up with a hilarious and great poem. made me smile
3rd Feb 2011 12:23pm
