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Started With A Garden
Body built for pleasures and the highest delights
oh what a high to know I did her right
from deep cowgirl to doggy style play
all those naughty things that a rigid little man will make her say
Moves like an enchantress I always submit to her spell
the more touches she gives the deeper I am in the well
shedding clothes or even buttoned up strong so are the charms
I can only hope the she means no harm
For just as men from time indefinite fall weak to a kiss
in her absence that is the warmth I shall miss
oh what a high to know I did her right
from deep cowgirl to doggy style play
all those naughty things that a rigid little man will make her say
Moves like an enchantress I always submit to her spell
the more touches she gives the deeper I am in the well
shedding clothes or even buttoned up strong so are the charms
I can only hope the she means no harm
For just as men from time indefinite fall weak to a kiss
in her absence that is the warmth I shall miss
Published 4th Dec 2013
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4th Dec 2013 3:26am
4th Dec 2013 8:34am
Anonymous
4th Dec 2013 5:47am
like the poem, but not quite sure how the title fits...
8th Dec 2013 10:39pm
Anonymous
4th Dec 2013 5:44pm
JAZZMANOR,
Very smooth brother Jazz! Loved the way you switched gears from the obvious to the simple missing of the kiss. Enjoyed!
tornado
Very smooth brother Jazz! Loved the way you switched gears from the obvious to the simple missing of the kiss. Enjoyed!
tornado
4th Dec 2013 11:20pm
Ironically I had my Ipod on shuffle and as I was writing, Bruce Hornsby's "Every Little Kiss" came on!
4th Dec 2013 8:58pm
a nice soulful piece ...
sometimes those naughty things are so funny when u think about it later and oozes pleasure... but when she is gone the same naughty acts reaps tears....
liked it ...
keep Rollin
cyanide.
sometimes those naughty things are so funny when u think about it later and oozes pleasure... but when she is gone the same naughty acts reaps tears....
liked it ...
keep Rollin
cyanide.
4th Dec 2013 11:25pm
well they say that the artists' curse is that so much more is created out of suffering then contentment. At the very least the worked produced is different in tone, I do believe.
4th Dec 2013 10:28pm
4th Dec 2013 11:27pm
guess I need to do something to raise the temperatures while my brother gets set to hop over to Hawaii next week to coach his basketball team!
5th Dec 2013 00:07am
...well that's a kick to the groin...i'm sure he might need some family advice...hmmmm sounds like Xmas should be celebrated there!!!
5th Dec 2013 3:52pm
not sure he would enjoy having to keep an eye on 14 teenagers for that long especially if they demanded to go to the mall!
5th Dec 2013 5:33am
"For just as men from indefinite fall weak to a kiss
In her absence that is the warmth I will miss"
Lovely lines Jazz,I enjoyed the read.
In her absence that is the warmth I will miss"
Lovely lines Jazz,I enjoyed the read.
5th Dec 2013 3:53pm
8th Dec 2013 10:16pm
Nicely penned JZM, a piece of poetry worth the read. You keep writing for your gift of poetic words are smooth like butter.
8th Dec 2013 10:43pm
