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naked angel
I don’t want to be formally introduced,
nor even talk to you.
I want to steal you, pick you up & carry you to the
nearest bed chamber; lock the door & eat the key.
keep you prisoner for merely a thousand millennia –
by then I’ll have had my fill of you.
my passion has always been a furnace in my belly.
soldier of deviance, without honor or regret,
I have lusted after women: virgins & whores,
to be used & abandoned.
and I remember not one face or one name.
I see you in the unobtainable distance, & you
transform the flame inside me to an inferno –
I soar like a comic book hero,
sun garbed creature, beyond Icarus.
were you deployed here by heaven, for a sacred purpose?
send them your resignation, you won’t be returning.
I will burn away your wings, so those
gracious feathers will not conceal your sex.
we will make our kingdom in an ivory tower;
I will nurture myself by your touch & your kiss.
I will guard the skies when you sleep,
and if you dream, I will be there.
I write poetry out of loneliness –
I write so that you will find me…
Published 2nd Dec 2013
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2nd Dec 2013 11:34am
I was looking for something to brace me for the start of this day ... And this was perfect ... The last two lines - exquisite
LSP
LSP
2nd Dec 2013 1:17pm
Completely agree with LSP...fantastic write!WOW!!Each word pulled me in wanting more! ;)
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2nd Dec 2013 8:02pm
The pic and poem go well with each other, a picture of seductive desire, of man as devil and woman as angel.
2nd Dec 2013 8:14pm
Your variations with structures, words and images you convey with all your poetry are superb. This piece is just an example of your soulful gift. Bleed that passion brother!
2nd Dec 2013 8:26pm
I love your poems, John, and I think
this I like most. An angelic write for an
angelic woman, full of desire and passion
and ... tender love.
this I like most. An angelic write for an
angelic woman, full of desire and passion
and ... tender love.
2nd Dec 2013 11:24pm
Thanks everyone for your overwhelming comments. you are poets of extraordinary talent, it's why I enjoy reading all of you, as well as so many others here.
I write hard, I bite into poetry like a wild animal ripping into a fresh kill...
I write hard, I bite into poetry like a wild animal ripping into a fresh kill...
4th Dec 2013 8:47pm
That
sounds
so
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooooaaaaarrrr ...
I'd love to read more :-).
sounds
so
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooooaaaaarrrr ...
I'd love to read more :-).
Anonymous
6th Dec 2013 7:49am
Heartstoppingly beautiful words, John.
12th Dec 2013 7:22am
The Animal in lust. The lust in devotion. The devotion in love. The love in expression. Thank you John. .
Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 3:57pm
I just have to say HOLY FUCK! John.
I was so struck by the second sentence, first stanza that I read the rest without seeing your words...four times
Finally, I'm breathing again. Relax, you won't be on the hook for my expiration today.
I was so struck by the second sentence, first stanza that I read the rest without seeing your words...four times
Finally, I'm breathing again. Relax, you won't be on the hook for my expiration today.
14th Dec 2013 5:48pm
I am at a loss for words at the moment... the only thing that comes to mind is if you kiss her mind the her body will follow...
