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Feel You In.
Palms on my waist.
Lips I could taste.
Breathe on my neck.
Achingly wet,
Please check.
Your eyes,oh my.
Delicate touch,
Peachy skin.
I swore I'd die,
If I didn't feel you in.
Lips I could taste.
Breathe on my neck.
Achingly wet,
Please check.
Your eyes,oh my.
Delicate touch,
Peachy skin.
I swore I'd die,
If I didn't feel you in.
Published 2nd Dec 2013
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2nd Dec 2013 2:24am
2nd Dec 2013 8:10am
It's my first attempt in the "erotiv" section,I didn't want to risk falling in lack of passion,so I just focused on this precise feeling,thank you though ! I'll write more:))
2nd Dec 2013 3:16am
2nd Dec 2013 8:12am
2nd Dec 2013 5:05am
2nd Dec 2013 8:16am
You probably wrote this comment simplt and randomly,but it makes me really glad ! Reason? This is exactly my intention and this is me,So thank you John !
2nd Dec 2013 2:45pm
2nd Dec 2013 4:50pm
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2013 8:36pm
EuphoricD,
Like the slow steamy spiral of this write ; )
Enjoyed!!!
Welcome to DU!
tornado
Like the slow steamy spiral of this write ; )
Enjoyed!!!
Welcome to DU!
tornado
2nd Dec 2013 8:46pm
Tornado ! Wow,Thanks a lot for your encouragement !
It means a lot and I'm oh-so-glad you think so !<3
It means a lot and I'm oh-so-glad you think so !<3
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 5:29am
This is very well written Eu...D! its a treat to read something from a young poet that isn't so cliche', write what you feel my friend..it's a good feeling :) xo
~Tom
~Tom
3rd Dec 2013 8:48am
Wow ! This is so precious ! Thanks a lot I'm so glad you thought so ,friend ..it sure is :)))xx
21st May 2014 4:21am
