Beauty

...is nice and tidy, though would have liked it too get going a bit...could've painted a tighter picture if you had an actual person in mind?

<I would have written (not it matters)

Perfection in her imperfection
The beauty in her flaws
Oh how we judge the innocent
Our own lost cause

Interesting to look at others work and imagine your own voice on it>

It's good that you can compare and contrast and I like your version too. The person in mind was me if anything, someone said to me the other day about my shoulder as I scratch it when I'm angry and I replied with, something along the lines of, 'I'm flawed.' Now, a few days on, I'm thinking why did I apologize, when did expectations get so high?
Sorry for my ramble - if you even read this...Thank you for the comment, it's lovely to hear another writers take on it =]

My dear...I read any reply to any post I ever make...seems rude not too. I enjoy your work ethic with your writing...love someone who goes at it like trench warfare :-)

Thank you, I get so excited with replies it's like a little kid getting an ice cream...with the flake =] Thanks again HH :)

I like this a lot :)

Thank you, aglitch! =]

The last line is like a treasure hunter finding El Dorado and the picture is like finding another trasure map thereafter.  Well done, truly.

Thank you, PTM, again a wonderful comment for such a short piece. I am so shocked to have gained such praise for such a short verse! Thank you.

Ignore that first comment. This poem is perfect. Letting it do on any further could have lead to redundancy or even a counterpoint. You did very well.