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Quiet
Every morning he brings her coffee in bed
the smell awakens her slowly from a warm sleep
He thinks of her, puts her first,
and she knows she is his center
He takes care of her, listens to her, comforts her,
makes her feel how important she is
He does this because he must, devotion to her happiness
unremarked in the outside world, unnoticed...
unspoken...his love is quiet…
the smell awakens her slowly from a warm sleep
He thinks of her, puts her first,
and she knows she is his center
He takes care of her, listens to her, comforts her,
makes her feel how important she is
He does this because he must, devotion to her happiness
unremarked in the outside world, unnoticed...
unspoken...his love is quiet…
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Re: Quiet
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 00:20am
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26th Nov 2013 00:22am
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Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 1:40am
Sweet... even moreso when returned in kind.
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Re: Quiet
26th Nov 2013 3:08pm
Honoring....Cherishing....
This is a quiet, tender testimony of love--heart to heart, soul to soul.
This is a quiet, tender testimony of love--heart to heart, soul to soul.
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26th Nov 2013 9:54pm
Re: Quiet
26th Nov 2013 9:22pm
That kind of love
is unearthly although
it surely feels
like heaven.
Touching words.
is unearthly although
it surely feels
like heaven.
Touching words.
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26th Nov 2013 9:56pm
Re: Quiet
27th Nov 2013 10:17pm
What a tender write. Luv that speaks from the heart is spoke the quietest. Beautiful! :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2018 4:45pm
28th Nov 2013 9:59am
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Re: Quiet
12th Dec 2013 9:12am
Well it's all been said, it's like reading this poem above a whisper will shatter it to a million pieces. Beautiful, and I personally could relate more to this one than the other one I read of yours.
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Re: Quiet
12th Dec 2013 11:40pm