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Conner Luve & Tub
Young love
fresh, new
full of firsts
daily love notes
pictures, smiles
that song that
belongs to you
and only you,
the way you both
laugh at each other
together or apart,
you're one complete
heart <3
fresh, new
full of firsts
daily love notes
pictures, smiles
that song that
belongs to you
and only you,
the way you both
laugh at each other
together or apart,
you're one complete
heart <3
Published 25th Nov 2013
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25th Nov 2013 1:57pm
Just so, and in their many musings they do contact to and fro, Kik and Skype and Facebook unto a mountain full, and have then the appearance of two owls at play among the trees as thick as thieves and wise as night.
25th Nov 2013 4:08pm
They do that facetime thing..it's cute!Young love!Thanks for reading Chris :)
25th Nov 2013 2:00pm
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25th Nov 2013 2:31pm
nicely scribbled expression wise ..lot of heartfelt words poured out.. I can smell it. fresh love always seems that way ..god bless u and keep ur relationship healthy..
and
' fresh, new
full of firsts
daily love notes
pictures, smiles
that song that
belongs to you'
try to add a bit of punctuation there .. u have added it in some places at the end and also in the beginning .. but I don't know, if u did that purposely or not..
'fresh, new,
full of firsts,
daily love notes,
pictures, smiles,
that song that
belongs to you.'
like this may be .. if u have written it for a purpose then keep it the way it is..and pls tell me the idea behind it ....
overall Tommie its a nice write...
keep Rollin
cyanide...
and
' fresh, new
full of firsts
daily love notes
pictures, smiles
that song that
belongs to you'
try to add a bit of punctuation there .. u have added it in some places at the end and also in the beginning .. but I don't know, if u did that purposely or not..
'fresh, new,
full of firsts,
daily love notes,
pictures, smiles,
that song that
belongs to you.'
like this may be .. if u have written it for a purpose then keep it the way it is..and pls tell me the idea behind it ....
overall Tommie its a nice write...
keep Rollin
cyanide...
25th Nov 2013 4:12pm
How you see it/how I wrote it is how I wanted people to see it/read it.This is about young love...most of us have been there, felt it, I get to relive it through my kids!I wrote this for my son and his beautiful girlfriend ;)Thank you for reading cyanide.
25th Nov 2013 3:25pm
I remember these feelings vividly...the void in the pit of your stomach when they go away...the euphoria when they stay. Thank you, Tommie, for the memory :)
25th Nov 2013 4:13pm
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25th Nov 2013 5:45pm
Beautiful words. That kind of love can stay young forever with some work!
25th Nov 2013 9:32pm
I agree M...these two "love birds " are adorable! Thanks for your wonderful comment ;)
25th Nov 2013 8:23pm
The shadow being cast in the picture underlines the one-ness in spirit of a loving young pair.
Favourite phrase - "full of firsts"
Favourite phrase - "full of firsts"
25th Nov 2013 9:36pm
This picture is one of many from an adventure walk we enjoyed...it was fun!I used that phrase because their love is new, fresh...but it's a phrase my husband says to me often! Thanks for reading ;)
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