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poetry should always be romantic
(Inspired by: 'Death is a secret. A love letter from hope.' Audeamus)
Hope held out, because that’s what she does.
It’s not in her nature to give up. clouds with
silver linings, four-leaf clovers, rainbows after
the rain: these were all her inventions.
But even Hope’s rope is not infinite, and just as
she was nearing the ragged end of it, she noticed
a mysterious figure lurking in the shadows;
dark, and somehow sexy.
A few correspondences later,
she knew she had found her mate,
because once Death has you
he never lets you go…
Published 24th Nov 2013
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24th Nov 2013 5:56am
Hope will always be my very favorite word in the English language, even with Death lurking at every corner...
24th Nov 2013 5:59am
this is darkly romantic write with deaths kiss.. beautifully inked.. peace Crim
24th Nov 2013 8:21am
Death always lurks around the corner and in the shadows... but, hops is always there and if it is found within death then so be it....
24th Nov 2013 10:22am
Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 4:17pm
So few certainties - hope and death among them. *love* this poem. Perfect as is but would have read pages had it gone on.
24th Nov 2013 5:56pm
Hope and Death compliment each in a utter contrast, inasmuch as, that it blinds the spirit into eternities grasp :) Adore this, John
"because once Death has you
he never lets you go…" so v.strongly put, no better way of saying this, the hearts in their grip know this.beautiful poetry feddler, loved this! &, am inspired to read Audeamus, that's strong too-death is a secret!
he never lets you go…" so v.strongly put, no better way of saying this, the hearts in their grip know this.beautiful poetry feddler, loved this! &, am inspired to read Audeamus, that's strong too-death is a secret!
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 8:41am
Beautifully woven romance, John.
26th Nov 2013 11:27am
You take conventional wisdom and kick it in it's butt! Then again, wisdom does contain much subjectivity...
Very much a classic write.
Very much a classic write.
27th Nov 2013 6:18pm
John the way you portray death is pure brilliance in this piece. A romantic tale of death and how their is no mistaken it. Superb!
5th Dec 2013 10:06pm
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