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Bondage of Grace {w.Crimsin}
In this garden of thorns and weeds
purple orchid, defiant
I have watched you blossom
Commanded by desire, I took you
to enslave you in manacled discipline,
singe a poetry of fire upon your flesh
You will sing the melody of subservience
bespelled by the thunder crack
embraced by iron seduction
Twilight sky, dominion of the tempest
fogbound gardens, obscure –
we need no stars
Nor the lovers moon, chastising –
our light shines
in the perfect dark
Under the hex of your power
I place myself into submission
a dominating force with a strong will
You sternly admonish me
not to break the binds
that tie me to your life giving waters
though I pull at the iron
that bends me to your will
wanting to submit
the fire in your eyes mesmerize
you are the stars and moon
in the darkness you alone shine
bedazzled and charmed by your fierce
yet tender and giving nature
falling into your arms
as you pull me hard into your embrace
bruising me without crushing
my petals opening to you with abandon
Published 21st Nov 2013
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21st Nov 2013 7:50pm
Chastising each with your fiery passion is stunning you two, I'm in love with the fire :)
It was a real pleasure writing with you John.. I think your part of the write is stunningly beautiful I enjoyed the melding of passions.. peace Crim
21st Nov 2013 8:24pm
Our thoughts mingled beautifully in this endeavor. we've made stimulating poetry, Crimsin...
21st Nov 2013 11:36pm
Beautiful Write You guys!!!
Strong Work-a tasty treat for the evening!!!
Strong Work-a tasty treat for the evening!!!
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2013 1:28am
Good to see this up - terrific write, both of you...
22nd Nov 2013 8:43am
24th Nov 2013 3:03am
"Singe a poetry of fire upon your flesh"...hot damn! This is one cerebral fire, masterfully struck & branded to my brain. I am envious of poets who are able to collaborate. & this one is seamless, stimulating both the mind & the flesh. I appreciate that more than anything. "Bruising without crushing", now that takes a skillful hand...
24th Nov 2013 4:49pm
You both did an
excellent job in (on?) this
collaboration!
Sweet passion drips
from every line. Enjoyed!
excellent job in (on?) this
collaboration!
Sweet passion drips
from every line. Enjoyed!
10th May 2016 6:59pm
Two of the best in cahoots, I mean collaborating. Such fire. Makes the rest of us step our game.
Thank You both
Thank You both
