first and last

poignant write one I felt in my heart.. peace Crim

glad it touched you...jag

Beautiful Ink Sir-Indeed!!!

thank you

A whisper is felt more deeply than a shout...

I agree...

I read it out loud...
the rhythm is

great music..:)

paul, you're the first to
realize I pay attention
to meter. I guess I'm ol' school...
thanks mate

Not the first - but perhaps the first to point it out...

Yes! you're right!

From an idealized naiveté to a jaded realism to a brilliant poignance to making the journey from first to last entirely worth it...

it usually begins with a scream & ends with a whisper...

it has been a long journey,
and I am a little hoarse...
but you sum it up nicely,
thanks b.

A brilliantly crafted poem.
Its conciseness adds to the poignant and
wistful content.
Moving and so beautiful, J.,
like the wonderful painting!

I merely the instrument
through which the poem
appears. Thank you for
your kind komments, chi...

I'm on a budget so I
try to use my words
sparingly...
thanks lv

Lovely sounds :)

thanks...

Beautiful whispered words...enjoyed! :)

words on a breath
words barely spoken...

words unspoken
but still felt by the heart :)