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Death and Destruction
Death and Destruction comes this way
Death and Destruction comes to play
Death and Destruction will have its way
This Day
Death and Destruction comes to play
Death and Destruction will have its way
This Day
Published 18th Nov 2013
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The author encourages honest critique.
This could also have been longer but again I like it. Good work.
I don't want be picky since I like this poem but... It should be "come" instead of "comes" and "their" instead of "its".
I don't want be picky since I like this poem but... It should be "come" instead of "comes" and "their" instead of "its".
19th Nov 2013 3:10am
that is cool I just chose it that way but I respect your honesty and criticism
I am new to poetry not reading just writing it so expect mine to be short for awhile
I am new to poetry not reading just writing it so expect mine to be short for awhile
19th Nov 2013 6:26am
