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"8 Minutes."
So I was told a couple
of weeks ago about an
ex-relative who was...
having chest-pains and
rushed to the e.r
They took her in and
were going to give her
shots of which she made
them aware-of that she
is deathly afraid
Was there any other way
So while the first doc
stepped-out, after a few
minutes another came in
and intended-on giving
her the shots anyways
But this had an adverse-
effect because she slipped-
out and actually flat-lined
for what they say was
around 8 minutes
They continued to work on
her and brought her back
and the story that she told
was kind of intense
She said that she entered
into a beautiful field, full of
absolutely brilliant looking
flowers by the thousands,
all in hi-definition colors
And that as she walked through
it she came upon a group of
people having a picnic
And feeling good here she
squatted and began to sit down
with them but they looked-up
and peacefully told her to go
away, she doesn't belong here
She immediately opened-up
her eyes and once again viewed
the inside of the e.r room
They said that she was out for
around 8 minutes but she said
that her time in the other place
seemed much longer and...
Sweeter
I've thought about it and it has
really made me say... Hmmh
of weeks ago about an
ex-relative who was...
having chest-pains and
rushed to the e.r
They took her in and
were going to give her
shots of which she made
them aware-of that she
is deathly afraid
Was there any other way
So while the first doc
stepped-out, after a few
minutes another came in
and intended-on giving
her the shots anyways
But this had an adverse-
effect because she slipped-
out and actually flat-lined
for what they say was
around 8 minutes
They continued to work on
her and brought her back
and the story that she told
was kind of intense
She said that she entered
into a beautiful field, full of
absolutely brilliant looking
flowers by the thousands,
all in hi-definition colors
And that as she walked through
it she came upon a group of
people having a picnic
And feeling good here she
squatted and began to sit down
with them but they looked-up
and peacefully told her to go
away, she doesn't belong here
She immediately opened-up
her eyes and once again viewed
the inside of the e.r room
They said that she was out for
around 8 minutes but she said
that her time in the other place
seemed much longer and...
Sweeter
I've thought about it and it has
really made me say... Hmmh
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