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No Doubt
no doubt
all the magic heartbeats
breathing in and out
we are here forever
of that there is no doubt
no big bang, eternity
on and on and on
in between and lifetimes
asleep we dream along -
I'm in you
you're in me
we are not alone
everything and everyone
telepathy's mind phones
connect us like the spaces
everywhere alive
electric currents flowing
allow us to survive -
in the mornings when we wake
at night time when we fall
summer when the air is warm
winter's frosty call
trepidatious feelings
and feeling very bold
heart to heart vibrations
breaking ego's mould -
all the magic heartbeats
breathing in and out
we are here forever
of that there is no doubt
all the magic heartbeats
breathing in and out
we are here forever
of that there is no doubt
no big bang, eternity
on and on and on
in between and lifetimes
asleep we dream along -
I'm in you
you're in me
we are not alone
everything and everyone
telepathy's mind phones
connect us like the spaces
everywhere alive
electric currents flowing
allow us to survive -
in the mornings when we wake
at night time when we fall
summer when the air is warm
winter's frosty call
trepidatious feelings
and feeling very bold
heart to heart vibrations
breaking ego's mould -
all the magic heartbeats
breathing in and out
we are here forever
of that there is no doubt
Published 11th Nov 2013
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12th Nov 2013 5:36pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 1:44am
Hi BCPoet
Nice poetry and website
Hello fellow Canadian
Welcome to DUP
Write on!
Kitty
Nice poetry and website
Hello fellow Canadian
Welcome to DUP
Write on!
Kitty
19th Dec 2017 12:54pm
"telepathy's mind phones
connect us like the spaces "-i imagine a network of spaces, a parking lot in their heads , constantly circling for a parking spot, spotting, like a bird watcher.
"electric currents flowing
allow us to survive"- Tesla timing races with the newest inventions , quarreling at a constant speed.
"at night time when we fall
summer when the air is warm
winter's frosty call "- whisking me through the seasons in three lines, learning all there is to know.
the crook in a shepherd's field watching the day drift into forever.
awesome write bcpoet
i really liked the imagery turned in this piece.
well penned.
connect us like the spaces "-i imagine a network of spaces, a parking lot in their heads , constantly circling for a parking spot, spotting, like a bird watcher.
"electric currents flowing
allow us to survive"- Tesla timing races with the newest inventions , quarreling at a constant speed.
"at night time when we fall
summer when the air is warm
winter's frosty call "- whisking me through the seasons in three lines, learning all there is to know.
the crook in a shepherd's field watching the day drift into forever.
awesome write bcpoet
i really liked the imagery turned in this piece.
well penned.
19th Dec 2017 6:30pm
Thank you for your thoughtful comments...rereading the poem I felt it needed a little polish and so have re-released it today re-titled Magic Heartbeats at https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/294127-magic-heartbeats/
Anonymous
17th Jan 2018 8:50am
excellent piece - connecting
17th Jan 2018 2:36pm
Anonymous
17th Jan 2018 3:37pm
yes, I noticed they are excellent additions.
