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Intent and Reality
I wish I could write a poem that would show
that the desire to seed you doesn't easily recede
I plead guilty in this wanting
the most carnal and intimate of deeds
It would convey the inadequacy of multiple wankings
preferring the friction of being in you tight
of that burst when I make a claim for your body
so relaxed I could sleep for the night
And suggest that this isn't a one time occurrence
that is if I can be found in your good grace
no let others search for total satisfaction
for us it is found in a constant place
that the desire to seed you doesn't easily recede
I plead guilty in this wanting
the most carnal and intimate of deeds
It would convey the inadequacy of multiple wankings
preferring the friction of being in you tight
of that burst when I make a claim for your body
so relaxed I could sleep for the night
And suggest that this isn't a one time occurrence
that is if I can be found in your good grace
no let others search for total satisfaction
for us it is found in a constant place
Published 11th Nov 2013
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11th Nov 2013 7:01pm
Ah, you absolutely made your wish come true with this hot and sensual piece, JAZZMANOR! I really love it!
12th Nov 2013 2:57am
Really...is there a secret you can share with us about making wishes reality? :) Love to get the Phd classes going with little or no debt to worry about at the end of the studies.
11th Nov 2013 7:34pm
Now that's intent and reality in the making. Here to me the kicker of this whole piece " It would convey the inadequacy of multiple wankings preferring the friction of being in you tight of that burst when I make a claim for your body so relaxed I could sleep for the night." Creatively done JZM as always.
12th Nov 2013 2:59am
Wow I didn't realize how long that line was until now!
Thanks for pointing out to me things I generally take for granted.
Thanks for pointing out to me things I generally take for granted.
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14th Nov 2013 2:55pm
and not quite as painful as dealing with the after effects of running a marathon!
