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cold sore
i hope your favorite color is orange
mulled over cider
because i failed you
today the sky was gray
today the sky was gray
on your lips
still be mine
now you know
how i feel
now we are
the same
...
today the sky was gray
today
the sky rained.
mulled over cider
because i failed you
today the sky was gray
today the sky was gray
on your lips
still be mine
now you know
how i feel
now we are
the same
...
today the sky was gray
today
the sky rained.
Published 6th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 4:12pm
There is always a strong sense of pureness in your words...The sky rained....great line
(YES, orange IS one of my fav colors indeed!)
(YES, orange IS one of my fav colors indeed!)
8th Nov 2013 11:55am
9th Nov 2013 7:29pm
I actually hate orange...Your words have suck a wave of emotion and imagery to them..great as usual...
Suddenly orange doesn't seem so bad...
Suddenly orange doesn't seem so bad...
