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identical opposites
whisper so quiet to be heard
hide away just to be seen
only fear the fear you feel
stay awake to sleep much more
sleep much more to stay awake
feel the fear that you feel
stand in sight to never be seen
scream as loud as you can to never be heard
hide away just to be seen
only fear the fear you feel
stay awake to sleep much more
sleep much more to stay awake
feel the fear that you feel
stand in sight to never be seen
scream as loud as you can to never be heard
Published 5th Nov 2013
| Edited 9th Jul 2016
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 7:27am
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5th Nov 2013 7:36am
5th Nov 2013 7:50am
A nice, tight, confident little poem even though there is some game going on that I don't understand. ('quite' line one a typo or deliberate word play?)
5th Nov 2013 8:04am
deliberate word play. i thought for along time how to word it the meaning is kinda if you try to be quite not to be heard someone will hear though its sorta a metaphor in that it has many more meanings. hope that helps
5th Nov 2013 9:52am
Some true ink from the heart and something i identify with, great write
~Mystic~
~Mystic~
5th Nov 2013 10:00am
