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Lately..............
.....I find myself not wanting to
talk to you
I don't even want to hear your words
They tease me into madness
and the longing brings about sadness
.....and that will never do.
Sometimes, in my mind
I'd just rather go blind
than see your face
on a picture in a frame
My mind plays evil tricks on me
got me calling out your name,
calling you.......
your voice answers so sweetly
and I reach out to touch your face,
you complete me so completely
but
you're not there....
I'm left in despair
......I find myself not wanting to talk to you baby
because
I want to see you
Nothing else on earth will do
I want to touch your face
Feel your warmest embrace
Want to take to the sky on a
natural high
I want to experience a brand new world,
shiny and new.....where I can share
every moment with you …...
for the rest of my life
Your body is a wonderland
and I've a yearning
to explore every curve, every subtle texture
every unique nuance
I want to be connected to you
in the most intimate of ways
Make love to you....
every
single
day
I need you like the air that I breath
Baby, baby.......please come to me
'cause I don't want to talk anymore
I just want to bask in your bright sun
hold you
feel you
love you.......
......forever
Published 2nd Nov 2013
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2nd Nov 2013 6:36pm
3rd Nov 2013 2:53am
Thank you Grace : ) Here's to getting back to what we do best here at DU.....we create : )
3rd Nov 2013 1:47pm
2nd Nov 2013 7:34pm
...such a beautiful ache of longing. I know the pain of wanting and needing someone so bad, that hearing them or mere thoughts of them, drives you insane. This is gorgeously penned sweety! Xoxoxo
3rd Nov 2013 2:56am
longing and absence make the heart grow fonder....it also drives you mad in the process. You know this thing? This longing? Ah then we have something in common : )
I thank you angel for the comment and support. : )
I thank you angel for the comment and support. : )
2nd Nov 2013 8:18pm
I am not going to even try to make musical references because much of what you pen here has more then one reference. I will say this piece starts out like a "With Or Without You" moment and then becomes an ode to that one true love.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
3rd Nov 2013 2:58am
Thank you my brother......it's a wonderful thing to be able to focus on the creation of beautiful ink sans the drama of ignorance and petty agendas. Thank you for your words my friend
3rd Nov 2013 4:42am
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3rd Nov 2013 12:04pm
Loving it loving it! If I ever have a fall out with my wife this is the piece to get her back. Beautifully, romantically done. My friend continue to keep blazing DUP with your art. Respect!
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4th Nov 2013 8:57am
the longing makes you go mad,it's tougher when you know you can't have that person
