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November 1st

Shopping in the grocery store.
Came around the end of the aisle.
And there stood,
The Halloween treat,
I had received the night before.

Even fully dressed,
As she was,
I recognized her.

And judging
By the shade of pink she turned,
She recognized me.

Without missing a beat,
I ask her to dinner.

She said that,
She was suppose to attend a party,
A costume party,
At the apartment complex where she lived.

But wasn’t going to go,
Her date had backed out,
When he saw the costumes,
She had prepared.

Again,
Without missing a beat,
I said that I would wear it,
Whatever it was,
If she was OK,
with me taking her date’s place.

She looked at me,
Squinted a bit,
Also, a touch of smirk,
And said yes, OK,
If I promised to wear,
The costume,
Without knowing what it was.

So, with the party to begin at 9,
Dinner was set for 7.

I arrived with a single,
Red rose.

She barely opened the door,
Squeezed out,
And we left for dinner.

Back at her place,
She started to open the door,
Hesitated,
And reminded me,
Of my promise.

I nodded,
She opened the door,
We walked in.

She turned to me and said,
“Strip.
Too the skin.
Including underwear and socks..
To.
The.
Skin.”

I started to follow her directions,
And saw that she was doing the same.

I remembered,
That last night,
She had announced her costume,
As —
“My most erotic dream come true.”

She looked at me,
Her eyes shifted,
Down there,
And said that she hoped,
The costume would work on me.

Both of us were bare.

My expression,
(Not to mention,
My erection)
Brought forth,
A quick comment,
“Later.
After the party.

And ==

“I promise.”

With the catch,
That I must keep my promise,
To collect her promise.

She tossed me.
What looked like,
A handful,
Of leaves.

On more careful,
Examination,
I saw that,
The leaves were sewn to,
A flesh colored,
Male proportioned,
Thong.

I looked at her,
And saw that she was,
Stepping in to a similar,
Flesh colored,
But clearly female,
Version of the thong,
I had in my hands.

Her words at my look were,
“You promised.”

I stepped into the thong,
Pulled it up,
Tucked myself into it,
And  asked,
“What am I suppose to be?”

As she tucked herself,
Into her, leaf covered bra,
She answered,
“Adam.
And I am your,
Eve.”

And so we exited her apartment,
Walked down the hall,
Waited for the elevator,
Received several,
Stares,
Winks,
And few out right laughs.

She signed us in at the door,
To the Party Room,
We crossed to the bar,
Where she ordered called,
“Sex on the beach.”
I respond with a,
“Between the sheets.”

Our costumes were a hit,
Many comments,
Mostly lewd,
Rude,
Or down right,
Suggestive.

We chatted,
Danced,
With each other and with others.

Several of my dance partners,
Commented that the leaves tickled.
Their tummies.

They should have been wearing them,
Where I was wearing them,
If they really wanted to experience,
An interesting feeling.

Later, after,
Many drinks,
Many dances,
A few pinched butts,
Yes, I pinched a few butts,
But, in fairness,
Only the butts belonging to
Girls who pinched,
Grabbed,
Or squeezed mine.
(An easy target, as bare as it was,
Only leaves down the center,
And both cheeks bare.)
It was well past 12,
The party was beginning to wind down.

I ask her if she wanted,
One more drink.

She smiled at me,
and said,
“Order me a Climax.”

I choked,
Coughed a little,
Ordered her drink,
Actually,
I ordered two.
No reason we both shouldn’t have one.

We,
With drinks in hand,
Headed back to her apartment.

Where she,
Started to pick the leaves off my costume.
I matched her,
Two for one,
One from her bra,
And one from her thong.

Did I say that there was,
A kiss between each,
Stripped leaf?
(Oh, and such a kiss.
Deep,
Tongues entwined,
Promising much more to come.)

Quickly we found ourselves,
Standing,
Bare of leaves,
But with her still wearing,
A completely see through,
Bra,
And. equally transparent,
Thong,
(Actually a very brief G-string.)
With me wearing my matching,
Nearly nothing,
transparent thong.

I embraced her,
Put my hands around her back,
Under her bra,
Ran them around to the front,
And pushed the bra up,
Over her head,
While her hands were up,
So that the bra would slide off,
My mouth found her nipples.

While my mouth took turns,
Kissing,
Sucking,
Nibbling,
At her nipples;
My hands moved down to,
Slide to her G-string,
T bare the rest of her.

As she lifted first one leg,
And then the other to,
Allow me to remove her G-string,
Her legs separated enough,
That my fingers not removing her G-string,
Found something to explore.

At my first touch,
I heard a catch to her breathing,
And as my figures explored,
Rubbed,
Parted,
And entered,
I heard a moan.

Suddenly,
Her hands were in my hair,
Pushing my mouth down,
To replace what my fibers had been doing.

Within moments,
I was carrying her to her bed.

As as I laid her on her bed,
She laughed,
Reached toward me.
And said,
“I need to let you out.”

She sat up,
Gripped my thong with both hands,
And teased it down,
First just enough that,
I, sort of, sprang free.

As she kissed the tip of my now free,
Cock,
Her hands had gone around to,
My butt,
Gripped both cheeks,
And pulled me toward her,
Into her waiting mouth.

She pushed my thong down,
I raised my leg,
My thong was off one leg,
While she continued to,
Treat my cock to,
Her wonderfully talented,
Mouth and tongue.

I don’t remember my thong being, removed,
From my other leg.

I do remember,
Pulling her mouth up to mine,
And leaning forward,
So that she fell on the bed,
With our mouths locked together,
And me between her legs.

Maybe because it has a head of its own,
My cock found its way to her cunt,
And entered,
As if those lips were a front door,
And it was going home.

Leaving,
Re-entering;
Sliding in,
Pulling back,
Moving slowly,
And, then not so slowly.

Mouths locked.
Arms wrapped,
Hands gripping,
A finger up my Ass!
So one of mine went up hers.

A last bit of swelling,
My balls aching,
Throbbing,
I felt a constricting,
A tightening,
She was cumming,
Triggering me,
I was cumming.
A simultaneous,
Orgasmic release,

As I finished,
I remained tightly in her,
Not wanting for it to stop.

And began gently moving in and out,
Of her.

She, smiled,
Said, “Thank you,
For keeping your promise.”

With my slow in-and-out movements,
I smiled and said,
“I plan to thank you,
for keeping your promise,
With more than just words.”
Written by J_J_Jay_Jr
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