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world
The world whirled around and round,
through gracious space without a sound,
inlaid with several salty jewels,
and several lands inlaid with fools.
through gracious space without a sound,
inlaid with several salty jewels,
and several lands inlaid with fools.
Published 30th Oct 2013
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8th Nov 2013 2:09pm
I completely agree with Chiyo, this is PRECISELY concise!
Awesome brevity dude :)
Awesome brevity dude :)
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