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Touch
Simple desires
Relighting my fires
Simple, yet affective
You, yes thats right
You naked and all mine
Is it too much to yearn for to
have that sexual hardness within
my guiding touch
To much to ask that it's to be only
For me, I hope I don't ask in vain
Right now it's you desired
Required to make me whole
Keeping me burning for you
No easy task
But your spot on so far
Yes indeed
Relighting my fires
Simple, yet affective
You, yes thats right
You naked and all mine
Is it too much to yearn for to
have that sexual hardness within
my guiding touch
To much to ask that it's to be only
For me, I hope I don't ask in vain
Right now it's you desired
Required to make me whole
Keeping me burning for you
No easy task
But your spot on so far
Yes indeed
Published 29th Oct 2013
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29th Oct 2013 6:25am
Sometimes a touch is more than physical and those are the ones which touches us deeply and thoroughly.
Very lovely, beautiful poetry.
Very lovely, beautiful poetry.
29th Oct 2013 6:43am
Touched in many ways we all are throughout our lives
As you rightly said not all of them in the physical sense
Its the ones that touch my heart that I remember more
Thankyou for commenting Vee
As you rightly said not all of them in the physical sense
Its the ones that touch my heart that I remember more
Thankyou for commenting Vee
29th Oct 2013 6:28am
That elusive touch that so many of us yearn for. Simultaneously soft & hard...a perfect joining. Terrific write, Rose :)
29th Oct 2013 6:44am
29th Oct 2013 7:15am
A sensual progress report if you will :)
A "Yes indeed" = 1 gold star, an A+
A "Yes indeed" = 1 gold star, an A+
29th Oct 2013 7:21am
29th Oct 2013 4:27pm
29th Oct 2013 4:56pm
hopefully ive given out as many as ive collected :)
yes indeed! (another one)
xD
yes indeed! (another one)
xD
30th Oct 2013 00:54am
d way invisible hands making d distance woman nude slowly nd gently...nd opening layers by layers...moving in every curve...nd igniting...dn sudden stop...to see d eyes...of woman...cause d woman seeing a thunder deep inside d passionate vision...nd stretched all..nudity scripted in d canvas of imagination...
29th Oct 2013 10:19am
29th Oct 2013 12:27pm
29th Oct 2013 3:49pm
Rose, I read it and loved
it and didn't turn red a bit
(well maybe just a little
bit..:)
it and didn't turn red a bit
(well maybe just a little
bit..:)
29th Oct 2013 4:14pm
i know paul :)
its ok, i wrote it thinking oh oh pauls going to blush at this..
hehe
glad you liked it xD
its ok, i wrote it thinking oh oh pauls going to blush at this..
hehe
glad you liked it xD
