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Daydreamin'...........(thinking of u)

     
     
"......Spending my day thinkin' 'bout you girl      
Being here with you, being near with you      
I can't explain myself      
Why I feel like I do....."
     
     
......her body is tired      
and I just don't want it to be so      
(She says I'm too good to her)      
woman, you just don't know..........
     
     
".....she's faced the hardest times you could imagine      
And many times her eyes fought back the tears, no no.....      
And when her youthful world was about to fall in      
Each time her slender shoulders bore the weight of all her fears      
     
And a sorrow no one hears      
Still rings in midnight silence, in her ears      
     
Let her cry, for she's a lady      
Let her dream, for she's a child      
Let the rain fall down upon her      
She's a free and gentle flower growing wild....."
     
     
I want to bathe your body      
Let me draw your bath      
Let me rub those soft, tired shoulders      
....tell you something good, let me make you laugh      
     
(.....this pleasure is all mine)      
     
and time after time      
I awaken just to find      
     
that      
     
I      
     
cannot      
     
get you      
     
off      
     
my      
     
mind.......      
     
Let me put you to bed      
Let me try something different instead........      
Let me come inside your heart      
Face to face, eye to eye      
this is where it starts      
     
Please baby, don't you move      
Feel my love growing deep inside      
Kiss my waiting lips....let's start this wonderful trip      
to paradise,      
you and I      
     
".....I want you, babe"      
will you be mine?      
until our next life time?      
     
Can't stop thinking about you      
Girl, there ain't no doubt      
I got to keep this to myself      
but my soul just wants to shout.....      
     
I'm 1000 miles away      
yet I close my eyes and I still see your face      
just as clear as a  
bright blue sun-shiney day.    
     
Lay your head upon my chest      
Take yourself a needed rest      
Let me love you      
I truly love you, babe      
     
     
"Let me take you home      
to keep you safe and warm      
til the early dawn warms up to the sun      
It would be so nice......."
     
     
Spending my forever      
     
with you.......
     
     
     
     
     
Author's Note-( I had really debated sharing this with but one person and in the process of posting the video-and YouTube's video processing ruining the video, I almost trashed the whole thing.  Edited the vid, uploaded again and the result was worse.  Must have been an omen.  But the message in this montage was more important to me than it's flaws.....so here it is. Hope you enjoy it.  ........and I hope *she* doesn't mind me showing my adoration in such a public forum.  Much credit due to two of my favorite 70's R&B artist and the slight covers used- "Still In Love With You". Al Green and "Wildflower", by New Birth ) xoxoxo
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
Published | Edited 29th Oct 2013
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