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Whatever it takes
I WILL...
oh yea, for real
you got it all...
over whim...
now baby,
fixate thy pupils...skim...
allow thee to press into your breast,
the context, that this verse disburse
thy thirst is expressed
best from the chest
it's a boil...
a langerin' into deep waters
uncoiled, the snakin' python's 'bout to
compress the skin...like osmosis
the closest he wishes
is to be in...DEEPLY
side by side,
high off of love's homocide
recreatin' procreatin'
in explicit coital position's
as he's fishin' in her fresh waters
broadenin' her borders,
the order's PLEASURE for the day
as heat seers lips, slick clit, n' soft bulbous tits all prey
to the mountin' explosion due to spew forth,
while he plunges ever more north...this mission's
prediction is success when it hits home at the heart of desire's
molten fire, a gyser few,view will usher a gusher,
as ecstasies rise higher n' higher...
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Re: Whatever it takes
25th Oct 2013 5:52pm
nice write my friend.. enjoyed it ...
beautiful lines ..
'recreatin' procreatin'
in explicit coital position's
as he's fishin' in her fresh waters'
good job again ...
cyanide..
beautiful lines ..
'recreatin' procreatin'
in explicit coital position's
as he's fishin' in her fresh waters'
good job again ...
cyanide..
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re: Re: Whatever it takes
25th Oct 2013 6:31pm
Thank my friend, I'm happy you enjoyed n truly, always grateful for your support :)
Re: Whatever it takes
25th Oct 2013 8:15pm
Extraordinary words for the
ordinary :-).
"He's fishing in her freshwaters",
that's so genial!
ordinary :-).
"He's fishing in her freshwaters",
that's so genial!
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re: Re: Whatever it takes
26th Oct 2013 5:45am
Miss Chiyo, ur one in a million! Thank you so much my friend
Truly appreciate all the support :)
Truly appreciate all the support :)
Re: Whatever it takes
25th Oct 2013 9:40pm
Wow! Wow! Your pen wasn't joking in this ink, Rich! :) I love how you 're willing to completely satisfy your woman with whatever it takes.... Xo
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re: Re: Whatever it takes
26th Oct 2013 5:50am
Lmao, ur excitement with this is sooooo flattering
I can't say thank u enough my sweet sexy! :)
Deeply appreciate you so much :)
I can't say thank u enough my sweet sexy! :)
Deeply appreciate you so much :)
Re: Whatever it takes
26th Oct 2013 00:47am
Richy Rich!!! Go 'head witcha bad self!
I enjoyed your word play, also. Xo
I enjoyed your word play, also. Xo
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re: Re: Whatever it takes
16th Nov 2013 00:18am
I'm sorry I missed this very sweet comment!
Thank u so much sweetheart, truly appreciate it :)
Thank u so much sweetheart, truly appreciate it :)
Re: Whatever it takes
Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 4:47am
Good to see you bouncin' back, cher... knew you wouldn't be down for long...

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re: Re: Whatever it takes
27th Oct 2013 4:54am
Not bouncing back at all... This is purely make believe in my always active imagination... But I do thank u for being kind enough to comment on my ink :)
Re: Whatever it takes
27th Oct 2013 5:02am
holy...smokies PIKM you are on top of your game here, impressive in every possible way!!
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re: Re: Whatever it takes
27th Oct 2013 5:11am
Lmao ur such a beautiful lift me up! top of my game huh?
WOW... I'm flattered beyond words... Thank you my sweet lady :)
WOW... I'm flattered beyond words... Thank you my sweet lady :)
Re: Whatever it takes
28th Oct 2013 4:10am
re: Re: Whatever it takes
Aaaawww thank u, yea honestly I write to a beat I hear inside of me so I guess that's why it comes out that way... I appreciate ur reading n commenting my ink :)