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Ascension Day
Mount Pelée in Martinique
sits on the earth's edge.
Stratovolcano with a
steamroller agenda.
Vapor and tremors rumble hello's
then it spits a rain of cinders.
White layer of ash spewed over
farmed, then wilder beasts, poisons
rivers, horses and cattle.
Pelée's black breath
gifts ash and gas and rocks;
the island chokes in sulfur.
The crater lashes out
boiling mud, tasting the river
and the sweet sugar works,
flavored with workers' bones.
The sea inhales, gush
hiccups over Saint-Pierre
town. Ships and boats
scatter and countryfolk
flood the town, as the trees
shrivel. The mayor locks down
all exits. Mountaintop flashes,
crater sores glow... flare.
Morning sparks, the last cable
telegraph falls silent under the ascension
and descent of a pyroclastic surge,
inferno purge as Pelée vomits death.
Eight square miles and thirty thousand
souls suffer its indigestion. Bodies burn
for days, shrouded in stench and ruins.
Layered corpses are lost, their eternal rest in ash.
As it was, on May 8, 1902
Entered in the Historical Events comp
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2013 1:51am
Great stuff. Best of luck in the comp.

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Anonymous
26th Oct 2013 6:43am
THAT, Atakti, was a blast!
Greatly described the process, and the tension of the rolling waves of lava moving forward...
Greatly described the process, and the tension of the rolling waves of lava moving forward...

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26th Oct 2013 9:51pm
So glad you caught the tension. That was harder to capture than the volcano eruption.
Thank you, Mourganna.
Thank you, Mourganna.
Re: Ascension Day
26th Oct 2013 9:45pm
This was FLAWLESS! Ur pen 'erupted' n created an image laden masterpiece :)
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1st Nov 2013 9:36pm
Your right, Evan probably would see some beauty in that day and claim it as his own. I hope you won
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2nd Nov 2013 00:43am