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the cold inferno
grips and rattles the tower
florid seppuku
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
24th Oct 2013
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24th Oct 2013 2:16pm
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LobodeSanPedro
24th Oct 2013 10:44pm
COOL! That third line was the hardest ... I was desperately trying to stay away from "suicide" ... so when I found that complementary contradiction I was so happy.
LSP
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case28
(Alexander Case)
27th Oct 2013 1:53pm
This one does rock, brother LSP. I love the sounds and imagery of the words. My favourite in a sound collection.
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