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Silent slumber
Satin sails silver sea
sun-soaked-sands-serene
silent-slumber-sleeping.
Eastern skies awake!
Dawn here, day begun
join the birds,
shells on the beach,
pebbles from eternity
far distant lands
all to share
waves,welcome tides
purple horizon,wedgewood sky
white gulls screech
none shall sleep
night is soon,
eyelids close,
silent-slumber-sleep.
Published 22nd Oct 2013
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22nd Oct 2013 2:47pm
This feels different from your usual style of good stuff-A different style of good stuff!
22nd Oct 2013 3:04pm
Thankyou catlady, every superfluous word removed.but not haiku ! You are very kind as usual
