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dharma hobo
life loves me more than she should
I am not faithful
or honest, and my head
is elsewhere most days
but I noted how gorgeous she was
in that dress
the one that she wears
to twirl on hillsides
when no one's watching
life lusts after the cowards strength
and lost her voice
flatter her privately once
even drunkenly
and she'll never forget
I am not faithful
or honest, and my head
is elsewhere most days
but I noted how gorgeous she was
in that dress
the one that she wears
to twirl on hillsides
when no one's watching
life lusts after the cowards strength
and lost her voice
flatter her privately once
even drunkenly
and she'll never forget
Published 21st Oct 2013
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21st Oct 2013 3:03pm
21st Oct 2013 4:43pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 7:03pm
Alternately flirty/unforgiving, she is a lovely piece of work. Enjoyed this, lightbaron.
~ Michelle
~ Michelle
21st Oct 2013 7:26pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 7:33pm
lmao - yes, she is. Thanks for the laugh!
25th Oct 2013 00:45am
There's a fine one. It is easy to understand but has a depth. Clear in what it has for imagery, then gets out fast before it overburdens the flow.
25th Oct 2013 1:41pm
25th Oct 2013 5:19am
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25th Nov 2013 10:32am
the one that she wears
to twirl on hillsides
when no one's watching
Hahaaaaa, cracker line! I like the girl already, and you for noticing her :-)
to twirl on hillsides
when no one's watching
Hahaaaaa, cracker line! I like the girl already, and you for noticing her :-)
25th Nov 2013 12:52pm
i have had this one vision, the one that would sum up the most for me in this world...it is girl, unaware, spinning on a hill....she has been a lover, sister, and daughter to me...and i have seen her, in her favorite dress
thank you for noticing me, noticng her
thank you for noticing me, noticng her
