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In a Rainbow
[center]The Power of Color
Listen to this, as you read please:
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4wdHgDfTQc[/url]
As I open my eyes,
blurry
yet I was surprised.
Where, was I?
Grandeur colors,
engulfed me,
it nearly made cry.
A touch of red,
sipping through my skin,
Not a burn,
but I felt my self yearn,
never had I realized that I'm
truly empty.
A touch of yellow,
reaching into my soul.
Not a burn,
But I felt myself yearn,
Was it my lack of happiness,
that me finally snap and loose control!
A touch of blue,
chilled the racing of my mind.
Not a burn,
but scorn,
my true self, I've had to so long
try to hide.
A touch of purple,
relaxed my aching spirit.
Not burn,
It did hurt,
for I had look to inside myself,
to see the wrong, and admit.
A touch of orange
helped me back on my feet.
Not a burn,
a reality it shown,
that I just need to endure,
to achieve what I believe.
A touch of green,
give me back my breath.
Not a burn,
but a lesson was learn,
That is truly rock bottom,
for anything bellow that, is death.
So I opened my eyes,
still blurry
yet I was surprised.
On a hospital bed, was I.
That rainbow,
gave me a second chance in life.
This time,
it really did make cry.
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Listen to this, as you read please:
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4wdHgDfTQc[/url]
As I open my eyes,
blurry
yet I was surprised.
Where, was I?
Grandeur colors,
engulfed me,
it nearly made cry.
A touch of red,
sipping through my skin,
Not a burn,
but I felt my self yearn,
never had I realized that I'm
truly empty.
A touch of yellow,
reaching into my soul.
Not a burn,
But I felt myself yearn,
Was it my lack of happiness,
that me finally snap and loose control!
A touch of blue,
chilled the racing of my mind.
Not a burn,
but scorn,
my true self, I've had to so long
try to hide.
A touch of purple,
relaxed my aching spirit.
Not burn,
It did hurt,
for I had look to inside myself,
to see the wrong, and admit.
A touch of orange
helped me back on my feet.
Not a burn,
a reality it shown,
that I just need to endure,
to achieve what I believe.
A touch of green,
give me back my breath.
Not a burn,
but a lesson was learn,
That is truly rock bottom,
for anything bellow that, is death.
So I opened my eyes,
still blurry
yet I was surprised.
On a hospital bed, was I.
That rainbow,
gave me a second chance in life.
This time,
it really did make cry.
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Published 18th Oct 2013
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18th Oct 2013 5:40am
18th Oct 2013 5:49am
21st Oct 2013 4:05am
Hello friend; ah man, dig this very much, there are power in colors, in words, even in numbers me feels, an you combined them together, just like the master writer you are... Not a burn, like how that is a theme in this... Though, my old, 36 year old eyes could not read the yellow part, hehehe... Yeah, me knows,
ps: Very Cute pic there ;)
ps: Very Cute pic there ;)
21st Oct 2013 8:19am
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you liked this write.
and thanks for the compliment!
XD
And yes... I tried to make this really deep. I've been at state where the colors did save me
I'm glad you liked this write.
and thanks for the compliment!
XD
And yes... I tried to make this really deep. I've been at state where the colors did save me
