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3 word: tumulence, miscarriage, inflatable (Titanic?)
Amongst the tumulence of the sinking ship
An inflatable raft bobs in the deep blue slip
The premature miscarriage caused a stir
Words of drunken dominion or a saboteur
While the yellow baby floats off
Neptune utters a twarted scoff.
An inflatable raft bobs in the deep blue slip
The premature miscarriage caused a stir
Words of drunken dominion or a saboteur
While the yellow baby floats off
Neptune utters a twarted scoff.
Published 17th Jan 2011
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19th Jan 2011 10:51pm
this harbours brilliant imagery and the shortness just makes it all the more better.
you show so much information in so little lines and i think its fantastic.
great.
you show so much information in so little lines and i think its fantastic.
great.
20th Jan 2011 9:47pm
I cannot say how uplifting your comment is on so many levels. I usually think my poems ramble with half-formed images. Maybe there's hope yet!
