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Soul food
My breath you did steal away
That stolen moment kissed
Kissed me you did as I fell
Between the words whispered
Taken in the night my spirit away
Danced we did, close up displays
Captured the moment toe to toe
Captured my heart as I fell into
You as you kissed my soul caressed
That stolen moment kissed
Kissed me you did as I fell
Between the words whispered
Taken in the night my spirit away
Danced we did, close up displays
Captured the moment toe to toe
Captured my heart as I fell into
You as you kissed my soul caressed
Published 17th Oct 2013
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17th Oct 2013 10:34am
17th Oct 2013 11:54am
Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 4:08pm
toe to toe..so pure and innocent, i love thinking about it.
Beautiful, lovely imagery :)
Beautiful, lovely imagery :)
17th Oct 2013 4:56pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 4:31pm
Rose I don't know ya, this is the first I've read but its so sweet, down home pure and lovely as a Royal Poinciana in bloom..it won't be the last :)
Thank you for the picture.
I hope you don't mind my adding that it reads like Star Wars Yoda it does...the force is strong within you. Beautiful work!
Thank you for the picture.
I hope you don't mind my adding that it reads like Star Wars Yoda it does...the force is strong within you. Beautiful work!
17th Oct 2013 4:58pm
Aww thankyou for the lovely comments
And happy you liked it enough to add
XD
And happy you liked it enough to add
XD
Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 8:23pm
Love the connection this poem shows with such beauty and simplicity.
17th Oct 2013 8:32pm
18th Oct 2013 00:18am
18th Oct 2013 6:14am
18th Oct 2013 4:55am
Kisses are most definitely my favorite soul food...with a side of collard greens and grits...yeeehaw y'all!!!
18th Oct 2013 6:16am
Yee haaaw
Yes agreed gahddess
Kisses make the world go round
Or is that my head spinning?
Bit of both I think XD
Yes agreed gahddess
Kisses make the world go round
Or is that my head spinning?
Bit of both I think XD
18th Oct 2013 8:48am
18th Oct 2013 1:51pm
18th Oct 2013 8:53am
I do love me some soul food. I miss it. Wish I could write like this sometimes...another gorgeous little piece, Rose :)
18th Oct 2013 1:52pm
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 4:58pm
I finish reading your poems and I find myself letting out a sigh of love and clasping my hands together tightly to my chin...lol.
This is beautiful and food for the soul.
This is beautiful and food for the soul.
19th Oct 2013 5:04pm
Aww bless you lena for your lovely comments
Glad you find something to take from my scribes
Glad you find something to take from my scribes
20th Oct 2013 8:05am
20th Oct 2013 8:11am
