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Evermore
I've taken your hand countless times
Leading me away to kissing towers and
Rolling marble floors in your masterful
Embrace I do live evermore my happiness
Does dwell within your hand that finds me
Reaching out, waiting my love, till my hand
Once more in your guidance I will surrender
Leading me away to kissing towers and
Rolling marble floors in your masterful
Embrace I do live evermore my happiness
Does dwell within your hand that finds me
Reaching out, waiting my love, till my hand
Once more in your guidance I will surrender
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 7:40am
Such a wonderful feeling to know the hand will hold and not let you go.
Very lovely scribe.
Very lovely scribe.
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 8:24pm
Sometimes reading your poetry makes me want to weep with longing.
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2013 2:23am
ahh Rose such sweet surrender, the faith you show in your partner would make any good man swell with pride and determination to live up to his promise. Beautiful piece :)
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