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dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
whether ye
let thee fatman die
trying or die
crying,
it's gonna make yOur
audience feel,
(&look),
like shit.......
this is no flaccid guess nor
estimate -
thee (I'maginations)
Of Truth
w'ill all ways
make them flee
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Written by
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
Published 15th Oct 2013
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Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Oct 2013 3:50pm
15th Oct 2013 3:38pm
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re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
15th Oct 2013 5:28pm
yes....
I count on you(&a very few others) to let me know what
I was saying....aye sure-as-shit don't know
bless ye,buddy
I count on you(&a very few others) to let me know what
I was saying....aye sure-as-shit don't know
bless ye,buddy
Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
15th Oct 2013 4:01pm
re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
15th Oct 2013 5:31pm
aye!
aye miss'ed that boat long ago, dartman!
don'even tink'bout it any no'more
aye miss'ed that boat long ago, dartman!
don'even tink'bout it any no'more
re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
15th Oct 2013 5:32pm
Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
15th Oct 2013 11:23pm
Truth hurts. Realities are harsh. I've whined & kicked & moaned over a number of facts o'er the tears a years. I find this offbeat language of yours relatable. Dig that unique voice. It's like Berryman on acid, or somethin'...
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re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 2:59am
been
readin mr.berry'man since before he jumped the bridge'''
a profound influence....as was acid in the long ago.
don't run into many who list Ambrose Bierce as a fav. He & ManBerry def on my list
readin mr.berry'man since before he jumped the bridge'''
a profound influence....as was acid in the long ago.
don't run into many who list Ambrose Bierce as a fav. He & ManBerry def on my list
Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 00:34am
berryman on acid..... lol
dddoggied i think you killed it with this one, sir
(pun intended)
short and straight to the kick in the teeth point
writers are such fickle creatures but our sense of impending doom never seems to waver...
oh, the readers... those poor naive bastards
dddoggied i think you killed it with this one, sir
(pun intended)
short and straight to the kick in the teeth point
writers are such fickle creatures but our sense of impending doom never seems to waver...
oh, the readers... those poor naive bastards
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re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 3:01am
Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 2:28am
Danno manno it's almost (dare I say) political, well I guess that might be too unkind for a pack of words I feel a kindness toward. I will instead call it a splendid exercise in detailing exorcism. Catch 22 if you tell us the truth here on this matter there will be no trees in the forest to hear the words fall.
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Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 3:07am
Braggo...you th'master at reading me. Can always count on ye to
tell me what I said;;;;;;;; I'me'mysElf rarely have a fckn clue
bless'ed be thee, Braggola
tell me what I said;;;;;;;; I'me'mysElf rarely have a fckn clue
bless'ed be thee, Braggola
Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 4:05pm
To die trying is comedy - to die crying is tragedy - but farce is reality - and no-one wants to deal with that - lol Love the poem!
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re: Re: dearAuthor\Auteur ~ ! set them mfkrs flee !
16th Oct 2013 4:47pm
wow---- I wish eye had said that.....
aye have missed ye most pro'foundly LeMuse.
g'oddbless
aye have missed ye most pro'foundly LeMuse.
g'oddbless