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Ponderings
That's something to ponder over
To save for a more appropriate time
when I'm alone, not when I'm out
food shopping.
Is there a set of underwear in my
drawer that has your name on it,
Property of..
Is there some lace in there that you
will actually touch, hopefully before
you slowly pull them off me..
or are we so far off that the ones to
be stained in you haven't been made
yet, the cotton still on the bush
and not covering mine.
such ponderings whilst standing at
the deli counter will have to wait till
I have time to delve deeper into my
thinking.
To save for a more appropriate time
when I'm alone, not when I'm out
food shopping.
Is there a set of underwear in my
drawer that has your name on it,
Property of..
Is there some lace in there that you
will actually touch, hopefully before
you slowly pull them off me..
or are we so far off that the ones to
be stained in you haven't been made
yet, the cotton still on the bush
and not covering mine.
such ponderings whilst standing at
the deli counter will have to wait till
I have time to delve deeper into my
thinking.
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Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:34pm
all manner of unspeakable thoughts during mundane tasks. This one made me laugh, so relatable. Enjoyed xo
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Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:36pm
yeah actually true
was at the deli counter
by the sausage selections and well..
my mind wondered away as per usual
xD
was at the deli counter
by the sausage selections and well..
my mind wondered away as per usual
xD
re: Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:42pm
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14th Oct 2013 4:48pm
hehe
i take one look at them
and my thinking goes all sensual
thankfully we only have it on the menu once a week
be too much otherwise..
i take one look at them
and my thinking goes all sensual
thankfully we only have it on the menu once a week
be too much otherwise..
Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:45pm
A truly clever, exciting line:
" the cotten still on the bush
and not covering mine as yet."
Fun piece...I personally like your ponderings unless of course it causes your to purchase way too much salami :)
" the cotten still on the bush
and not covering mine as yet."
Fun piece...I personally like your ponderings unless of course it causes your to purchase way too much salami :)
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re: Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:49pm
Re: Ponderings
Anonymous
14th Oct 2013 4:47pm
LOL! This made me feel relieved to know my thoughts are normal while at the grocery store.
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re: Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 4:51pm
sausages are one thing but whoooa don't go near the
cucumbers
my sensual thinking can't take it all in
cucumbers
my sensual thinking can't take it all in
Re: Ponderings
Anonymous
14th Oct 2013 6:26pm
Smiling at this one... texting at the supermarket...
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Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 6:47pm
all this talk of sausages...
let's hear it for the little
cocktail one's you get at
buffets...no..? oh well...sigh...
let's hear it for the little
cocktail one's you get at
buffets...no..? oh well...sigh...
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14th Oct 2013 7:24pm
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14th Oct 2013 8:44pm
re: re: Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 10:10pm
I'm sure we would be contemplating the destruction of the universe! Thanks naughty ladies!
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15th Oct 2013 5:48am
First there was man..
And look how naughty he was. .
Not doing as he was told
And look how naughty he was. .
Not doing as he was told
Re: Ponderings
14th Oct 2013 10:47pm
Little things...or in this case BIG things can take us away :)...also I really like the pink frilly ones in the corner lol...great read :)
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re: Re: Ponderings
15th Oct 2013 5:50am
Yeah the picture is for the men to ogle at
While us women do the shopping
Hehe
Back soon
XD
While us women do the shopping
Hehe
Back soon
XD
Re: Ponderings
15th Oct 2013 1:28am
Have to say, I really enjoy the randomness of this one, and the imagery. Well done!
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Re: Ponderings
Anonymous
15th Oct 2013 3:55am
So relatable Rose, if we could only read minds what others are thinking during shopping spree..:))
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Re: Ponderings
15th Oct 2013 5:51am