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Seaside Rock
I am owned
Free to choose my own path
Select my own direction
Talk with whoever
Whenever
But
I'm owned
His name engraved
Within
Like seaside rock
Wherever I go
Whatever I do
I am his
He knows it
Lets me be Free to be who I want to be
Helps me achieve my goals
What I couldn't before
Happiness
He owns me
Heart
Spirit
Soul
Body
I signed it all over
Happily
He owns everything that is me
As I own everything that is him
Equal ownership
Free to choose my own path
Select my own direction
Talk with whoever
Whenever
But
I'm owned
His name engraved
Within
Like seaside rock
Wherever I go
Whatever I do
I am his
He knows it
Lets me be Free to be who I want to be
Helps me achieve my goals
What I couldn't before
Happiness
He owns me
Heart
Spirit
Soul
Body
I signed it all over
Happily
He owns everything that is me
As I own everything that is him
Equal ownership
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Re: Seaside Rock
13th Oct 2013 10:00am
Lets me be Free to be who I want to be
Helps me achieve my goals
What I couldn't before ...
Loved this part - and the seaside rock reference ... Those rocks get battered with each ebb - great and small ... Yet remain steadfast ...
LSP
Helps me achieve my goals
What I couldn't before ...
Loved this part - and the seaside rock reference ... Those rocks get battered with each ebb - great and small ... Yet remain steadfast ...
LSP
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13th Oct 2013 10:03am
Re: Seaside Rock
13th Oct 2013 11:27am
Lovely write. Where one joyously gives their whole self to the one they love. Ty syn
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re: Re: Seaside Rock
13th Oct 2013 11:36am
Yes agreed syn
As long as both equally
Give themselves
I don't speak for him here
He has his own voice as I do
But we believe in equality
For long lasting relationship
As long as both equally
Give themselves
I don't speak for him here
He has his own voice as I do
But we believe in equality
For long lasting relationship
re: re: Re: Seaside Rock
13th Oct 2013 12:00pm
There's something beautiful even in your response. You respecting his voice and thoughts and leaving them untouched. Lovely. Just had to say.
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13th Oct 2013 12:07pm
He knows my thoughts
I wouldn't want it any other way
I know his thoughts
He wouldn't want me to guess
I don't share his thoughts
They are personal
For me alone
Tnx syn for commenting
I wouldn't want it any other way
I know his thoughts
He wouldn't want me to guess
I don't share his thoughts
They are personal
For me alone
Tnx syn for commenting
Re: Seaside Rock
13th Oct 2013 12:06pm
Feeling the love synergy in this piece Rose. Wonderful interpretation of completion.
S:)
S:)
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