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The Shitfight
Sometimes shit seems so similar
blurred out of focus my mind turns to shit.
The fuck am I thinking now?
Beaten like a dog,
you're in tears
because the dog's bitten back.
Punch drunk punk with a pompous attitude
hail me king shit and leave my ego unchecked.
Don't you look down on me, motherfucker
I'll see your judgement and raise you a right
locked into my sight knocked out.
Turn away, I'm done.
I'll down another schooner and be on my way.
It's always a shitfight to the Bar
blurred out of focus my mind turns to shit.
The fuck am I thinking now?
Beaten like a dog,
you're in tears
because the dog's bitten back.
Punch drunk punk with a pompous attitude
hail me king shit and leave my ego unchecked.
Don't you look down on me, motherfucker
I'll see your judgement and raise you a right
locked into my sight knocked out.
Turn away, I'm done.
I'll down another schooner and be on my way.
It's always a shitfight to the Bar
Published 12th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2013 8:19pm
"I'll see your judgement and raise you a right "...my fave line. :D
But is that the worst you can do? It' still too good. (I saw it on the comp "give your worst".) I Good luck. :)
(I might spit shine your trophy if you win. :P I mean the competition cup, not that other...)
But is that the worst you can do? It' still too good. (I saw it on the comp "give your worst".) I Good luck. :)
(I might spit shine your trophy if you win. :P I mean the competition cup, not that other...)
14th Oct 2013 7:40am
Awesome Evan. Exactly what I was looking for right now, glad to come back to the Evan I knew. :) keep on brother.
