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Rage
Trying to control me
like you own my twisted soul
is so very foul to my being
i'm going to be me
dark depraved at times
vomiting when you said
write only light poems
full of fluff
that isn't me
I won't let a sub put cuffs
on my mouth
bind and gag me
you aren't a master
of any kind
who the hell do you think you are
trying to tie me up
with your wicked conniving ways
stuff your words up your ass
your voodoo too
it doesn't work on me
darkness is where I tread
a child of the night
it feeds and frees my soul
I wrote skull fuck
just to let you know
I like hard hitting poems
so take your trees and fuck yourself in the ass
i'm free enough said
like you own my twisted soul
is so very foul to my being
i'm going to be me
dark depraved at times
vomiting when you said
write only light poems
full of fluff
that isn't me
I won't let a sub put cuffs
on my mouth
bind and gag me
you aren't a master
of any kind
who the hell do you think you are
trying to tie me up
with your wicked conniving ways
stuff your words up your ass
your voodoo too
it doesn't work on me
darkness is where I tread
a child of the night
it feeds and frees my soul
I wrote skull fuck
just to let you know
I like hard hitting poems
so take your trees and fuck yourself in the ass
i'm free enough said
Published 9th Oct 2013
| Edited 10th Oct 2013
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9th Oct 2013 5:20pm
I love it, Sinful Criminal! You tell that fucker like it is, girl. Fuck 'em. Write from the heart.
Rock on!
Gemini
Rock on!
Gemini
I will Gemini I was writing angry poems for awhile and listing them as erotic but really I was pissed the fuck off.. thank you for the support peace Crim
9th Oct 2013 5:24pm
a-fucking-men girl!
Kick ass write, loving the fuck out of all the enlightenment floating through the filth spewed by wolves in sheeps clothing.
Kick ass write, loving the fuck out of all the enlightenment floating through the filth spewed by wolves in sheeps clothing.
9th Oct 2013 5:33pm
Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 5:40pm
hell yeah!! I love it, lady!
that is some powerful writing and I wish we had more free souls like you!
write on! peace n love,
miki :-)
that is some powerful writing and I wish we had more free souls like you!
write on! peace n love,
miki :-)
9th Oct 2013 5:48pm
Thank you Miki free at last!!! sigh thank you again beautiful lady for such an empowering comment.. peace Brenda
9th Oct 2013 6:05pm
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9th Oct 2013 6:26pm
I thought that was a given....what is the point of being free if you can't be yourself? Nevertheless, it bares repeating over and over and over....
I won't let a sub put cuffs
on my mouth
bind and gag me
Getting here was tough enough.....so, no and not and no way and ain't gonna happen and this is how it rolls.....for me.
I won't let a sub put cuffs
on my mouth
bind and gag me
Getting here was tough enough.....so, no and not and no way and ain't gonna happen and this is how it rolls.....for me.
9th Oct 2013 7:34pm
9th Oct 2013 6:28pm
Thank you Kitty I've been angry for awhile now it was Mia-Shadoe that finally helped me speak up about it... peace Crim
Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 00:15am
Wow Brenda you've unleashed the dragon in this one, almost like a bottled up explosion, let your pen flow the way you see fit. Loving the power in you!
10th Oct 2013 00:23am
Vee my anger at trying to be controlled has been boiling inside me for awhile.. thank you lovely lady for the support.. peace Brenda
10th Oct 2013 1:10am
you truly made me believe that you are a creature of darkness
who sees darkness
breaths darkness
who even birth darkness
and anyone who doesnt like it can kiss your ass
I love this and that your not afraid to be you
who sees darkness
breaths darkness
who even birth darkness
and anyone who doesnt like it can kiss your ass
I love this and that your not afraid to be you
10th Oct 2013 6:44am
10th Oct 2013 1:24am
Can I get Ah hell yeah!
Love This....
Freedom to be who you are not who others say you should be.
XOXO
Fire
Love This....
Freedom to be who you are not who others say you should be.
XOXO
Fire
10th Oct 2013 6:45am
Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 3:19am
Wonderfully angry and cathartic
I loved it
Write on!
Kitty
I loved it
Write on!
Kitty
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10th Oct 2013 6:28am
Haha......I love your rage, Brenda! :)
Tell'em how you really feel! Nice! Xo
Tell'em how you really feel! Nice! Xo
Thank you Rain sigh i'm not all dark rage but if someone tries to control me I am.. p.s. I tried to thumbs up your comment but there is a glitch.. peace Brenda
10th Oct 2013 1:22pm
I'm very proud of you Brenda. Standing up for yourself and writing not just one but two fuck you I'm gonna do me poems. They all rock anyways so vent away or write some sunshine, who cares what anyone else thinks. Sometimes we have let out a little rage. I only wish I was brave enough to let mine out recently... Awe well I'll borrow your strength for the time being if you don't mind. Much love beautiful.
10th Oct 2013 3:29pm
Kourtniss I was boiling under the surface writing an angry poem in Skull Fuck but it wasn't until Mia stood up that I had the courage to say directly why I was so angry.. I love you beautiful lady thank you.. peace Brenda
10th Oct 2013 4:20pm
HAHAHAHA :D
O how i Love this Write Dear Crim-Fire...Such strength is needed ALWAYS in course of Self-preservation...Always cherished Brenda!!!
O how i Love this Write Dear Crim-Fire...Such strength is needed ALWAYS in course of Self-preservation...Always cherished Brenda!!!
10th Oct 2013 4:30pm
10th Oct 2013 9:43pm
Big respect of you for being yourself.
Plenty of writers write in a specific genre or style and hover there most of the time.
What I appreciate of you is the humanity and unfettered revelation you share through your words. Plenty of times they are tough to read knowing it is usually more than just words on the screen you present.
Thank you for not allowing anyone to corral you and take away your spirit
Plenty of writers write in a specific genre or style and hover there most of the time.
What I appreciate of you is the humanity and unfettered revelation you share through your words. Plenty of times they are tough to read knowing it is usually more than just words on the screen you present.
Thank you for not allowing anyone to corral you and take away your spirit
10th Oct 2013 9:57pm
Thank you Ken.. it took me awhile though of boiling in my juices and a beautiful lady's encouragement to get to my feet again and be me.. peace Brenda
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29th Oct 2013 5:04am
UHHHHHHhhhhh WooHooo....Fucking wHo? LOL
God I Love YOU ♥
I Feel Your Pen....SOooo Deep
God I Love YOU ♥
I Feel Your Pen....SOooo Deep
29th Oct 2013 8:51am
they're gone now lol.. thank you lovely lady for getting my writes.. much love Crim :)
