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The Aftermath
The aftermath of an ending
Is like a distant mocking laughter
That never seems to cease
Or endless senseless mutterings
Of regrets and doubts
Breakups are like smeary fingerprints
On the walls of the heart
a smudged painting on the soul
they are never really completed
yet never need the finishing touches
there is always that familiar figure
in a crowd of thousands
and you feel like reaching out
until you realise it’s a stranger
the storm within will start again
you look within yourself
was the poison worth it
was the hurt worth it
or the anger and the hatred
or the cuts and wounds within
The aftermath is never pretty
No fragrance wafting from exotic places
Or Elysian fields, pretty flowers all in a row
It’s devastation upon the soul
A desolation within the heart
But the air will be fresher
Although the future unclear.
Is like a distant mocking laughter
That never seems to cease
Or endless senseless mutterings
Of regrets and doubts
Breakups are like smeary fingerprints
On the walls of the heart
a smudged painting on the soul
they are never really completed
yet never need the finishing touches
there is always that familiar figure
in a crowd of thousands
and you feel like reaching out
until you realise it’s a stranger
the storm within will start again
you look within yourself
was the poison worth it
was the hurt worth it
or the anger and the hatred
or the cuts and wounds within
The aftermath is never pretty
No fragrance wafting from exotic places
Or Elysian fields, pretty flowers all in a row
It’s devastation upon the soul
A desolation within the heart
But the air will be fresher
Although the future unclear.
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Re: The Aftermath
9th Oct 2013 2:10pm
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9th Oct 2013 2:24pm
Yes and never allow the storm to catch up with you, because it cannot be stopped with a fire extinguisher...thanks for reading, Soul.
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9th Oct 2013 2:29pm
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9th Oct 2013 2:45pm
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9th Oct 2013 3:01pm
What was that bleeding mantra?
was the poison worth it
was the hurt worth it
or the anger and the hatred
or the cuts and wounds within?
was the poison worth it
was the hurt worth it
or the anger and the hatred
or the cuts and wounds within?
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9th Oct 2013 4:23pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 5:40pm
oh, how true it is
I feel you, Grace
wonderful writing :-)
I feel you, Grace
wonderful writing :-)

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9th Oct 2013 11:36pm
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11th Oct 2013 8:23pm
For someone who makes decided journeys into the storm, this provides excellent perspective. A pleasure to read.
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12th Oct 2013 00:17am
Never ride into the storm I'd say, unless one is pushed into it. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments, Utmakalitho.