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stationary...
we were catch
ing diff'rent
trains and mine
was running
late and yours
oh yours was
the one that
got away...
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9th Oct 2013 2:45am
I love the thought you put into this, but there is a strong emotional element at work here, as well. Catch that departure. Good works, dartford.
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9th Oct 2013 12:36pm
Thanks, B...it's knowing
when to leave it alone and
decide that it's done, but
for this poem it was easy...
when to leave it alone and
decide that it's done, but
for this poem it was easy...
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9th Oct 2013 3:45am
awww i love this, so sentimental and beautiful..Dartford this just tugs at my heart strings.
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